Jan. 30, 2024
Date night with my boyfriend!
Today i went to a date with my boyfriend. Usually we don't go out during the week because we're very busy with studying. But in three days I'm going to have an exam: Christian and churches history! Very interesting same as difficult... There are so much information to memorize, but I'm sure I can do it. Thanks to my boyfriend I feel very happy and peaceful with myself now. He had a very nice thought.
That's all! Hope y'all a goodnight. :)
Oggi ho avuto un appuntamento con il mio fidanzato. Solitamente non usciamo durante la settimana perché siamo molto impegnati con lo studio, ma fra tre giorni ho un esame: storia del cristianesimo e delle chiese. È molto interessante e allo stesso modo difficile. Ci sono tante informazioni da memorizzare, ma sono sicura di farcela. Grazie al mio fidanzato mi sento molto felice e in pace con me stessa. Ha avuto un bel pensiero. Questo è tutto! Auguro a tutti una buona notte. :)
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Thanks to my boyfriend I feel very happy and peaceful with myself now.
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Good luck on your exam!
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I am not sure what you are trying to say here. Maybe “He is very thoughtful”?
Hope y'all had a goodnight.
Date night with my boyfriend!
Today iI went ton a date with my boyfriend.
But in three days, I'm going to have an exam: Christian and churches’ history!
Very interesting same asyet difficult...
There areis so much information to memorize, but I'm sure I can do it.
Thanks to my boyfriend, I feel very happy and peaceful with myself now.
He had a very nice thought.
I’m not sure what you are trying to express here. Did he do something thoughtful for you?
That's all!
Hope y'all have a goodnight.
:)
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Nice job!
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Hope y'allou all had a goodnight.
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This is maybe a little too much like chat speak for this kind of correction but I am glad you had a good reason to relax!
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I would use the word "however" if you are starting a separate sentence, but I would use the word "but" if you wanted to connect the two clauses together to form one sentence. I understood better what you were trying to say here once I could see it in your native language. |
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There are so much information to memorize, but I'm sure I can do it. There There There are so much information to memorize, but I'm sure I can do it There The verb refers to "information" which is singular - so the verb form must match. |
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