Nov. 2, 2025
Dance performance will start.
I"m waiting for daughter's dance performance right now.
My daughter is looking forward this event, and I'm really looking forward it too.
I really feel that child’s growth is happy for parents.
Dance pPerformance will start.Starting Soon
Looking at the entire piece of writing, this feels like an appropriate title. We usually do not use a full stop in titles.
I"'m waiting for my daughter's dance performance to begin right now.
You need to specify whose daughter it is, so you should include "my".
My daughterShe is looking forward to this event, and I'm really looking forward to it too.
Since you've mentioned your daughter already it's clear that "she" would refer to her.
"looking forward" requires "to" after it.
I really feel that seeing our child’ren's growth is a happy thing for parents.
This is a general statement, so should be in plural.
Adding the word "seeing" here means that you are observing the growth (because you cannot experience the growth yourself, you witness it).
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I hope your daughter's performance goes well.
Nov. 3, 2025
Thanks for feedback.
I didn’t know about rules of title.
And I’ll take care of your advices.
I"'m waiting for my daughter's dance performance right now.
An apostrophe ( ' ) is what you use for contractions like "I'm" and possessive marks like "daughter's".
My daughter is looking forward this event, and I'm really looking forward it too. So am I.
Actually what you originally wrote was grammatically correct. It's just that it feels repetitive; to keep it nice and simple, "So am I." is how you indicate that you feel the same way. (If it helps you remember, it acts a bit like 「私も」.) "Me too." is a frequent alternative.
I really feel that a child’s growth is happy foa source of happiness for their parents.
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Please send my best wishes to your daughter on my behalf. :)
Nov. 3, 2025
Thank you for feedback.
I really think “so am I” is helpful and simple sentence.
Actually, I often think that my sentences are longer than I expected.
Your suggestion is helpful.
Thank you so much.
Nov. 3, 2025
You're welcome. A variation of that is "So do I.", for situations where you are performing an action.
Nov. 3, 2025
Thank you again, Arcsrorm!
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Dance performance will start. Dance Looking at the entire piece of writing, this feels like an appropriate title. We usually do not use a full stop in titles. |
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I"m waiting for daughter's dance performance right now. I An apostrophe ( ' ) is what you use for contractions like "I'm" and possessive marks like "daughter's". I You need to specify whose daughter it is, so you should include "my". |
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My daughter is looking forward this event, and I'm really looking forward it too. My daughter is looking forward this event Actually what you originally wrote was grammatically correct. It's just that it feels repetitive; to keep it nice and simple, "So am I." is how you indicate that you feel the same way. (If it helps you remember, it acts a bit like 「私も」.) "Me too." is a frequent alternative.
Since you've mentioned your daughter already it's clear that "she" would refer to her. "looking forward" requires "to" after it. |
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I really feel that child’s growth is happy for parents. I really feel that a child’s growth is I really feel that seeing our child This is a general statement, so should be in plural. Adding the word "seeing" here means that you are observing the growth (because you cannot experience the growth yourself, you witness it). |
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