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Juanpis

June 10, 2025

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Today I woke up 6:00 o'clock but i see for windows and the weather was ugly because it's raining. I was wanted to going out to work out ride my bike. but i came back in my bed and i kept sleep.

I woke up gain to 11:00 o'clock, my room was bright, but it was too late to going out to work out. I had breakfast oatmeal and cookies

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Daily routine

Today I woke up 6:00 o'clock, but iI see foraw through the windows andthat the weather was ugly because it' was raining.

I was wanted to going out to work out rideside so I could work out by riding my bike.

bBut i cameI went back in my bed and i keptback to sleep.

I woke up again ato 11:00 o'clock, my room was bright, but it was too late to going out to work out.

I had breakfast, which was oatmeal and cookies.

Today I woke up 6:00at 6 o'clock but i see forwhen I looked through the windows and, the weather waslooked ugly because it' was raining.

I was wanted to going out to work out ride my bike.

but iI came back in myto bed and i keptwent to sleep.

I woke up again ato 11:00 o'clock, m. My room was bright, but it was too late to going out to work out.

I had breakfast oatmeal and cookies for breakfast.

Daily rRoutine

Oddly, title case has special capitalization rules.

Today I woke up 6:00 o'clock but i see for, and I saw through the windows andthat the weather was ugly because it' was raining.

There are various ways this could be written, but a comma is needed.

"but" usually indicates a problem that gets in the way of something else, so "and" seems better here.

The rest of the changes help the sentence flow more smoothly

I was wanted to going out to work out and ride my bike., but I went back in my bed and kept sleeping.

You could say "was wanting" or "wanted" with the same effect.

The period at the end can be replaced with a comma in order to combine this independent clause with the dependent clause that follows.

but i came back in my bed and i kept sleep.

Because this is a dependent clause, it should be preceded by a comma and attached to the previous sentence. We wouldn´t say "came back to bed" unless you were still in bed when you wrote this. "Went back to bed" would mean that you eventually got out of bed. You could also say "returned to bed," which works fine in both meanings.

When I woke up again ato 11:00 o'clock, my room was bright, but it was too late to going out to work out.

You could also say:

I woke up again at 11 o´clock, and my room was bright, but it was too late to go work out.

OR

I woke up again at 11 o´clock, but even though my room was bright, it was too late to go work out.

also, time is usually written like this:

1. eleven o´clock
2. eleven
3. 11:00
4. 11 o´clock

I had breakfast oatmeal and cookies for breakfast.

This sounds more natural.

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You´re communicating clearly about your morning! Errors didn´t make it harder to read or understand. They were mainly weird grammatical things.

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Juanpis

June 10, 2025

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Thanks you ! For you feedback.

Daily routine


Daily rRoutine

Oddly, title case has special capitalization rules.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I woke up 6:00 o'clock but i see for windows and the weather was ugly because it's raining.


Today I woke up 6:00 o'clock but i see for, and I saw through the windows andthat the weather was ugly because it' was raining.

There are various ways this could be written, but a comma is needed. "but" usually indicates a problem that gets in the way of something else, so "and" seems better here. The rest of the changes help the sentence flow more smoothly

Today I woke up 6:00at 6 o'clock but i see forwhen I looked through the windows and, the weather waslooked ugly because it' was raining.

Today I woke up 6:00 o'clock, but iI see foraw through the windows andthat the weather was ugly because it' was raining.

I was wanted to going out to work out ride my bike.


I was wanted to going out to work out and ride my bike., but I went back in my bed and kept sleeping.

You could say "was wanting" or "wanted" with the same effect. The period at the end can be replaced with a comma in order to combine this independent clause with the dependent clause that follows.

I was wanted to going out to work out ride my bike.

I was wanted to going out to work out rideside so I could work out by riding my bike.

but i came back in my bed and i kept sleep.


but i came back in my bed and i kept sleep.

Because this is a dependent clause, it should be preceded by a comma and attached to the previous sentence. We wouldn´t say "came back to bed" unless you were still in bed when you wrote this. "Went back to bed" would mean that you eventually got out of bed. You could also say "returned to bed," which works fine in both meanings.

but iI came back in myto bed and i keptwent to sleep.

bBut i cameI went back in my bed and i keptback to sleep.

I woke up gain to 11:00 o'clock, my room was bright, but it was too late to going out to work out.


When I woke up again ato 11:00 o'clock, my room was bright, but it was too late to going out to work out.

You could also say: I woke up again at 11 o´clock, and my room was bright, but it was too late to go work out. OR I woke up again at 11 o´clock, but even though my room was bright, it was too late to go work out. also, time is usually written like this: 1. eleven o´clock 2. eleven 3. 11:00 4. 11 o´clock

I woke up again ato 11:00 o'clock, m. My room was bright, but it was too late to going out to work out.

I woke up again ato 11:00 o'clock, my room was bright, but it was too late to going out to work out.

I had breakfast oatmeal and cookies


I had breakfast oatmeal and cookies for breakfast.

This sounds more natural.

I had breakfast oatmeal and cookies for breakfast.

I had breakfast, which was oatmeal and cookies.

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