Daily Life - writing practice

themjgh

May 25, 2025

Daily Life - writing practice - day 1

I'm trying hard to stick to my 90-day plan to improve my language skills. I like to learn how to write and speak in a way that sounds more natural, not just too formal and academic. So my teacher suggested writing here. I don't know if this information is topic-related, but I always prefer to talk more about the context. Let's talk about my daily life a bit. I am a software engineer, working in a VOD platform as a Front-End developer. I usually get up at 8 in the morning because I am working remotely and don't have to get up early. Our first online meeting starts at 10, so I have enough time to have my breakfast. It's so hot outside and we don't have electricity for 2 hours every day, but I managed to do all my tasks today. Since my grandma lives in the same apartment as we do, I usually have lunch with her. I have to write 150 words in each exercise, so until next one, bye!

من دارم خیلی تلاش میکنم که به برنامه ۹۰ روزه زبانم پایبند باشم تا مهارت های زبانیم رو تقویت کنم. دوست دارم یادبگیرم که به روشی صحیت کنم و بنویسم که طبیعی باشه و خیلی رسمی و آکادمیک نباشه. بنابراین معلم زبانم نوشتن در اینجا رو بهم پیشنهاد داد. نمیدونم این اطلاعات به موضوع ربط داره یا نه ولی من همیشه ترجیح میدم که درباره پیش زمینه موضوع بیشتر صبحت کنم. یکم درباره زندگی روزمره ام صحبت کنیم. من مهندس نرم افزار هستم و در یک
پلتفرم استریم ویدیو به عنوان توسعه دهنده فرانت-اند مشغول به کارم. من معمولا ۸ صبح از خواب بیدار میشم چون به صورت ریموت کار میکنم و مجبور نیستم صبح زود بیدار بشم. اولین جلسه آنلاین ما ساعت ۱۰ صبح درنتیجه وقت کافی دارم که صبحانه بخورم. هوا خیلی گرمه و ما روزانه ۲ ساعت برق ندارم اما تونستم امروز همه تسک هام رو انجام بدم. چون مادربزرگم با ما در یک آپارتمان زندگی میکنه معمولا ناهار رو با اون میخورم. من باید ۱۵۰ کلمه بنویسم برای هر تمرین به همین خاطر تا بعدی خدانگهدار!

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Needmorespeed

Daily Life - writing practice - day 1

I'm trying hard to stick to my 90-day plan to improve my language skills.

I'd like to learn how to write and speak in a way that sounds more natural, not just ~~too~~ formal and academic.

So my teacher suggested writing here.

I don't know if this information is topic-related, but I always prefer to talk more about the context.

Let's talk about my daily life a bit.

I am a software engineer, working in a VOD platform as a Front-End developer.

I usually get up at 8 in the morning because I am work~~ing~~ remotely and don't have to get up early.

Our first online meeting starts at 10, so I have enough time to have my breakfast.

It's so hot outside and we ~~don't~~ have no electricity for 2 hours every day, but I managed to do all my tasks today.

Since my grandma lives in the same apartment as ~~we do~~us, I usually have lunch with her.

I believe "as we do" IS grammatically correct, it's just that in this contexts "us" sounds more natural.. probably because of the verb "live"

I have to write 150 words infor each exercise, so until next one, bye!

In works sometimes - you might hear natives say it - but in this context "for" always trumps "in", can't go wrong with it..

For all 4 exercises it says I should (blah blah blah)

shadowfax26

Daily Life - writing practice - day 1

I'm trying hard to stick to my 90-day plan to improve my language skills.

I like to learn how to write and speak in a way that sounds more natural, not just too formal and academic.

So my teacher suggested writing here.

I don't know if this information is topic-related, but I always prefer to talk more about the context.

Let's talk about my daily life a bit.

I am a software engineer, working in a VOD platform as a Front-End developer.

I usually get up at 8 in the morning because I am working remotely and don't have to get up early.

Our first online meeting starts at 10, so I have enough time to have my breakfast.

It's so hot outside and we don't have electricity for 2 hours every day, but I managed to do all my tasks today.

Since my grandma lives in the same apartment as we do, I usually have lunch with her.

I have to write 150 words in each exercise, so until next one, bye!

Daily Life - writing practice - day 1