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Sept. 26, 2025

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Daily Life: Part 22

I have been doing something that could make me rich. Since I quit my job two years ago, I have no money right now. So I decided to get some money, actually, I'm a deliver , but I don't think I can live just being a deliver, Because this is low-pay work. So I want to do another part-time job to support my basic living. I heard that being an influencer can get a lot of money, so I ran into this area, but I found something that is not easy for a newbie. First of all, I should have more than 1000 fans, then I need to pay 500RMB deposit. I believe this is not good for me, as far as I can't do that right now. Finally, I will stick with my original plan to enroll in various delivery apps. So, wishing me get a best of luck.

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Daily Life: Part 22

I have been doing something that could make me rich.

Consider:

1) I have been doing something that 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 make me rich.

2) I started a new activity recently that could end up making me rich

Since I quit my job two years ago, I have no money right nown't made any money at all - even currently, I'm broke.

So I decided to get a job and earn some money, - actually, I'm a deliver y man, but I don't think I can live just being a deliver, By man because thiat's is low-paying work.

So I want to do another part-time job to support my basic livingneeds.

Also sayable: Work another part-time job

I heard that being an influencer can getmake you a lot of money, so I ran intoexplored thisat area, but I found somethingencountered a couple requirements that is noaren't easy for a newbies to meet.

First of all, I shouldhave to have more than 1000 fans, then I need to pay 500RMB deposit.

If you want to use should you can probably say:
*According to these guys*, I should have more than 1000 fans, then I need to pay 500RMB deposit.
Just sounds a tad better.

I believe this is noThis obviously isn't good news for me, as far asnd my situation, because I can't doachieve that right now.

So, wishing me get a best of luck.

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bobjohn

Sept. 27, 2025

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Thanks!

Daily Life: Part 22

So I decided to get some money, actually,. I'm a deliver y person, but I don't think I can live just bedoing a deliver, Because this is low-pay worky service. Since it's a low-paying job.

So I want to do another part-time job to support my basic way of living.

I heard that being an influencer can get a lot of money, so I ran into this arealooked into it, but I found somethingout that is not easy for a newbie.

First of all, I should have more than 1000 fans, then I need to pay a 500RMB deposit.

I believe this is notdon't think this good for me, as far assince I can't do thait right now.

Finally, I will stick with my original plan to enroll in various delivery apps.

So, wishing me get athe best of luck.

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Pretty good stuff! Sorry if I misinterpreted some of your words.

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bobjohn

Sept. 27, 2025

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Thanks

Daily Life: Part 22


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have been doing something that could make me rich.


I have been doing something that could make me rich.

Consider: 1) I have been doing something that 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 make me rich. 2) I started a new activity recently that could end up making me rich

Since I quit my job two years ago, I have no money right now.


Since I quit my job two years ago, I have no money right nown't made any money at all - even currently, I'm broke.

So I decided to get some money, actually, I'm a deliver , but I don't think I can live just being a deliver, Because this is low-pay work.


So I decided to get some money, actually,. I'm a deliver y person, but I don't think I can live just bedoing a deliver, Because this is low-pay worky service. Since it's a low-paying job.

So I decided to get a job and earn some money, - actually, I'm a deliver y man, but I don't think I can live just being a deliver, By man because thiat's is low-paying work.

So I want to do another part-time job to support my basic living.


So I want to do another part-time job to support my basic way of living.

So I want to do another part-time job to support my basic livingneeds.

Also sayable: Work another part-time job

Finally, I will stick with my original plan to enroll in various delivery apps.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, wishing me get a best of luck.


So, wishing me get athe best of luck.

So, wishing me get a best of luck.

I heard that being an influencer can get a lot of money, so I ran into this area, but I found something that is not easy for a newbie.


I heard that being an influencer can get a lot of money, so I ran into this arealooked into it, but I found somethingout that is not easy for a newbie.

I heard that being an influencer can getmake you a lot of money, so I ran intoexplored thisat area, but I found somethingencountered a couple requirements that is noaren't easy for a newbies to meet.

First of all, I should have more than 1000 fans, then I need to pay 500RMB deposit.


First of all, I should have more than 1000 fans, then I need to pay a 500RMB deposit.

First of all, I shouldhave to have more than 1000 fans, then I need to pay 500RMB deposit.

If you want to use should you can probably say: *According to these guys*, I should have more than 1000 fans, then I need to pay 500RMB deposit. Just sounds a tad better.

I believe this is not good for me, as far as I can't do that right now.


I believe this is notdon't think this good for me, as far assince I can't do thait right now.

I believe this is noThis obviously isn't good news for me, as far asnd my situation, because I can't doachieve that right now.

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