WI hatd a bad day recently!

Sentence sounds uncomplete, I had instead of what makes it flow better.

I have broken my mobile phone three times in three days; every day it hasit broken once every day.

- change past tense: instead of "I have broken", "I broke"
rearrangement of sentence to make it flow better

I couldn't endure this, I haveit cost me, 420 RMB to mended my phone by costing 420 RMB!

once again, past tense and rearrange words to help flow of sentence

I hate that damn phone holder, because it really pisses me off!

"pisses me off" is used when something or someone is responsible

I want to play a set of Kung Fu right now.

I don't know what a "set" of Kung Fu is.

Anyway, I need to fillmake up for my loss.

losses aren't filled.

There are other things that are also makeing me upset, since I hadbecause I submitted my situation ton the delivery APP, and they havedn't given me no sense ofany feedback, so I can't get any subsidy.

I believe I have the right to strikewith drawl my money from the delivery APP.