First of all, I don't know why I couldn't get a check out for the previous chapter, because i have tried to post part 19 twice.

I don't understand what you mean by a check out

Anyway, let's talk about the interesting topic that if you would like to drive a car for a shuttle?

removing the interesting topic makes sentence flow better.

Some people are thinking that driving a car to work is reallymeans a lot of trafficed.

'trafficked' is not something we say when talking about traffic on the roads.

another one versuss think that it's more comfortable than others . shuttles

Another one versus doesn't make sense
Specify what others you are speaking about to make sentence more clear.

But for mePersonally, I never use a car foras transport.

Personally is a more natural way of saying for me.

You know some electric bikes can reach outup to almost 60km per hour, i guess that would suffice for most of people.

bikes should be plural in this case
reach up to instead of out

For the comfortable sectionargument, come on, this is a tools that helps you arrive somewhere as fast as possible, and it isn't a house.

the word section wouldn't be used here.

First of all, I don't know why I couldn't get a check outorrection for themy previous chapterpost, because iI have tried to post part 19 twice.

I’m assuming you meant someone correcting your work. “Post” also works better instead of chapter here

Anyways, let's talk about thean interesting topic that if you would. Would you like to drive a car for a shuttle?

It’s easier to read if you split this sentence up and phrase the second part as a question. I wasn’t sure what you were trying to say here so I kept it the same

Some people are thinking that driving a car to work is really trafficedbusy.

1. You should use “think” here instead of “ are thinking”
2. “Busy” sounds better here than “natural”

anoOther one versuspeople think it'’s more comfortable than others nvenient.

This sentence is formatted incorrectly. If you were trying to say some other people prefer to drive, it should be written like so

wWhat do you think?

But for me, I never use a car for transportation.

The word “transport” is being used as a noun here, so you should say “transportation”

YDid you know some electric bike can reach out almost 60km per hour, i guess? I feel like that would suffice for most of people.

1. The first sentence should be formatted as a question. “Did you know?” is a common phrase is English, and I feel like it fits here
2. “I feel like” sounds more natural
3. “That will suffice” should be followed by “for” if you’re talking about people

For the comfortable sectionconvenience, come on, this is a tools that helps you arrive somewhere as fast as possible, and it isn't a house.

1. It seems like you got the word “comfortable” mixed up with “convenient”. Since this word is also being used as a noun, you should say “convenience”
2. The verb “help” is conjugated incorrectly. The he/she/it pronoun is almost always followed by an “s”
3. Not sure what you mean by “it isn’t a house”

I believe that if you want to goet to work, an electric bike is the best onthing to use!

This sentence should be restructured as it’s a bit odd-sounding