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June 5, 2021

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Cup noodle support EGO

The biggest cup-noodle maker allowanced.

They will stop provide the “plastic seal” in a cup noodle.

They said by stop provide this seal will use less 33 tons of plastic in a year.

33 tons!

Furthermore, the redesign the top cover on the cup.

To make sure when we put hot water inside the cup, the heat will not escape quickly.

Next time when I come to Japan, I want to buy the new design package.

I hope other cup noodle makers will follow the same policy.

So, when you go to supermarket or convenience store to buy a cup noodle.

Please do take a look is it no “plastic seal” version.

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Cup noodle supports are going EGCO

ECO= environmentally friendly

The biggest cup-noodle maker allowanced.has announced that big changes are coming.

Again, I'm not too sure what the original meaning was supposed to be, but you could change "announced that big changes are coming" with "announced a new plan to tackle plastic waste" etc ^^

They will stop provide theincluding “plastic seals” in a cup noodle.

They said bythat stop provideping the use of this seal will use 33 less 33 tons of plastic in aper year.

33 tons!

Furthermore, they will redesign the top cover onf the cup.,

Alternatively you could say "redesign the lid"
I would merge these two sentences into one, using a comma.

Tto make sure when we putthat when hot water inside the cups added, the heat will not escape quickly.

Next time when I comego to Japan, I want to buy the new design package design.

So, when you go to a supermarket or convenience store to buy a cup noodle.,

Again, I think that these sentences would be better to make into one ^^

Pplease do take a look is it nolook to see if it's the “plastic seal” version.

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This is great news!

Cup noodle support EGO


Cup noodle supports are going EGCO

ECO= environmentally friendly

The biggest cup-noodle maker allowanced.


The biggest cup-noodle maker allowanced.has announced that big changes are coming.

Again, I'm not too sure what the original meaning was supposed to be, but you could change "announced that big changes are coming" with "announced a new plan to tackle plastic waste" etc ^^

They will stop provide the “plastic seal” in a cup noodle.


They will stop provide theincluding “plastic seals” in a cup noodle.

They said by stop provide this seal will use less 33 tons of plastic in a year.


They said bythat stop provideping the use of this seal will use 33 less 33 tons of plastic in aper year.

33 tons!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Furthermore, the redesign the top cover on the cup.


Furthermore, they will redesign the top cover onf the cup.,

Alternatively you could say "redesign the lid" I would merge these two sentences into one, using a comma.

To make sure when we put hot water inside the cup, the heat will not escape quickly.


Tto make sure when we putthat when hot water inside the cups added, the heat will not escape quickly.

Next time when I come to Japan, I want to buy the new design package.


Next time when I comego to Japan, I want to buy the new design package design.

I hope other cup noodle makers will follow the same policy.


So, when you go to supermarket or convenience store to buy a cup noodle.


So, when you go to a supermarket or convenience store to buy a cup noodle.,

Again, I think that these sentences would be better to make into one ^^

Please do take a look is it no “plastic seal” version.


Pplease do take a look is it nolook to see if it's the “plastic seal” version.

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