May 31, 2021
Cream bun
A cream bun is one of the most popular buns in Japan.
Because I also love this, every time I go to a bakery I must buy one.
But today unique cream buns were sold at a grocery store in my university for a limited time.
Those were much softer than those ones I usually eat.
I heard they were also sold last year but I couldn't notice at that time.
I hope I can get them next year.
Cream bBun
Titles in English usually have capital letters at the start of every word apart form words like 'the/to/from/of' :)
A cream bun is one of the most popular buns in Japan.
Because I also love this, em too, every time I go to a bakery I must buy one.
But today unique cream buns were sold at a grocery store in my university for a limited time.
Thosey were much softer than those ones I usually eat.
'Those' isn't wrong but 'they' works better here :)
I heard they were also sold last year but I couldidn't notice at that time.
'couldn't' implies you were unable to because of a specific reason but 'didn't' implies you missed it :)
I hope I can get them next year.
Feedback
Great, easily understood :)
June 13, 2021
Thank you so much!
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Cream bun Cream Titles in English usually have capital letters at the start of every word apart form words like 'the/to/from/of' :) |
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A cream bun is one of the most popular buns in Japan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because I also love this, every time I go to a bakery I must buy one. Because I |
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But today unique cream buns were sold at a grocery store in my university for a limited time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Those were much softer than those ones I usually eat. Th 'Those' isn't wrong but 'they' works better here :) |
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I heard they were also sold last year but I couldn't notice at that time. I heard they were also sold last year but I 'couldn't' implies you were unable to because of a specific reason but 'didn't' implies you missed it :) |
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I hope I can get them next year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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