Oct. 12, 2025
Crazy Invention (or Maybe Not)
I was thinking about it last night. I have big issues with my clothes, because my life is half in cold weather, and other half in hot weather. So, I always need to carry a big bag, and think where I'm going to save clothes that I don't need at the moment. Taking this into account, I really would appreciate to have a portable closet, or a place when I can change my clothes like a character of The Sims, hahaha.
It would be unbelievable to have a portable device taller than a phone, that saves all my wardrobe digitalized. I could bring it in my suitcase, open a mobile application, choose my outfit, put it on the floor, and it would project a hologram that changes my clothes instantly. Then I'll never have to pack or get worried about the weather. Only with a click, and it's ready: new clothes, new style, new weather.
I know if something like this would exist, a mobile device that materializes things in the air with solid holograms, it not only solves clothes problems... literally it would change the world!
Anoche estaba pensando en eso. Tengo un gran problema con mi ropa, porque paso la mitad del año en clima frío y la otra mitad en clima caliente. Así que siempre tengo que cargar una maleta enorme y pensar dónde voy a guardar la ropa que no necesito en ese momento.
Teniendo eso en cuenta, me encantaría tener un clóset portátil, o un lugar donde pudiera cambiarme de ropa como si fuera un personaje de Los Sims, jajajaja.
Sería increíble tener un dispositivo pequeño, del tamaño de un celular, que guardara toda mi ropa digitalizada. Podría llevarlo en la cartera, abrir una aplicación, elegir mi outfit, al ponerlo en el suelo, y proyectaría un holograma que me cambia la ropa al instante. Así nunca tendría que empacar ni preocuparme por el clima. Solo un clic, y listo: nueva ropa, nuevo estilo, nuevo clima.
Sé que si algo así existiera, un dispositivo que materializa cosas en el aire con hologramas sólidos, no solo resolvería temas de ropa… ¡literalmente cambiaría el mundo!
I was thinking about it last night.
I have big issues with my clothes, becauseand it's because of half my life is halfbeing in cold weather, and other half in hot weatherhalf hot.
So, I always need to carry a big bag, and think about where I'm going to save clothes that I don't need at the moment can conserve clothes.
Taking this into account, I really would appreciate to have a portable closet, or a place when I can change my clothes like a character of The Sims, hahaha.
It would be unbelievable to have a portable device, especially one taller than a phone, that saves all mymy whole wardrobe digitalizedly.
I could bring it in my suitcase, open a mobile applicationclick an app, choose my outfit, and put it on the floor, and it would to project a hologram that changes my clothes instantly.
I never noticed multiple nonrestrictive clauses used as a sequence like this lol but can work like this.
Then I'll never have to pack nor get worried aboutworry over the weather.
Only with a click, and it's ready: new clothes, new style, new weatherfunctionality.
I know if something like this would exist, a mobile device that materializes things in the air with solid holograms, it would not only solves clothesing problems... but literally it would change the world!
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Yay
Oct. 13, 2025
I couldn't change it but 'appreciate to have' should just be 'appreciate having'. not only is 'having' the present tense which is when you'll appreciate it, but 'to' secretly is short for 'towards', and you are not appreciating a goal or anything, probably.
Oct. 13, 2025
Hello! Oh thank you so much for your corrections. I'll take into account it, maybe I need to practice more.
I was thinking about itsomething last night.
You need to specify what “it” is before you use it
I have biglots of issues with my clothes, because mywhere I lifve is half in cold weather, and other half in hothas both cold and warm weather.
This sounds more natural
So, I always need to carry a big bag, and think about where I'm going to save clothes that I don't need at the moment.
Taking this into account, I really would appreciatlike to have a portable closet, or a place when I can change my clothes like a The Sims character of The Sims, hahaha.
The word “appreciate” sounds very odd here
It would be unbelievableamazing to have a portable device taller than a phone, that saves all my wardrobe entire digitalized.
1. The word “unbelievable” sounds kinda off here. A word like “awesome” or “amazing” would work better.
2. “All my wardrobe” sounds weird. When referring to objects like wardrobes, the word “entire” is used instead.
Only withWith just a click, and it'’s ready:; new clothes, new style, new weather.
“With just a click” sounds better than “only with a click” in this context
I know if something like this would exist, a mobile device that materializes things in the air with solid holograms, itexisted, it would not only solves clothesing problems... it would literally it would change the world!
1. This sentence is a bit cluttered and confusing, and since we already know what you’re referring to, you can take out the description of this device
2. Since you’re describing a hypothetical scenario, you should use the conditional tense for the other verbs in this sentence
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Good as always ;3
Oct. 13, 2025
Hello! I'm continue improving! Thank you for your corrections, and your time too. Best regards!
Oct. 13, 2025
Of course! Good luck with your improvement!
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I have big issues with my clothes, because my life is half in cold weather, and other half in hot weather. I have This sounds more natural I have big issues with my clothes, |
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Taking this into account, I really would appreciate to have a portable closet, or a place when I can change my clothes like a character of The Sims, hahaha. Taking this into account, I really would The word “appreciate” sounds very odd here This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It would be unbelievable to have a portable device taller than a phone, that saves all my wardrobe digitalized. It would be 1. The word “unbelievable” sounds kinda off here. A word like “awesome” or “amazing” would work better. 2. “All my wardrobe” sounds weird. When referring to objects like wardrobes, the word “entire” is used instead. It would be unbelievable to have a portable device, especially one taller than a phone, that saves |
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I could bring it in my suitcase, open a mobile application, choose my outfit, put it on the floor, and it would project a hologram that changes my clothes instantly. I could bring it in my suitcase, I never noticed multiple nonrestrictive clauses used as a sequence like this lol but can work like this. |
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Then I'll never have to pack or get worried about the weather. Then I'll never have to pack nor |
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Only with a click, and it's ready: new clothes, new style, new weather.
“With just a click” sounds better than “only with a click” in this context Only |
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I know if something like this would exist, a mobile device that materializes things in the air with solid holograms, it not only solves clothes problems... literally it would change the world! I know if something like this 1. This sentence is a bit cluttered and confusing, and since we already know what you’re referring to, you can take out the description of this device 2. Since you’re describing a hypothetical scenario, you should use the conditional tense for the other verbs in this sentence I know if something like this would exist, a mobile device that materializes things in the air with solid holograms, it would not only solve |
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