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April 1, 2021

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As the world plunged into epidemic calamity and the freedom of good people of Middle-Earth was questioned, sovereign states began to introduce various measures to prevent the spread of COVID-19. To curb the spread of the virus, all sorts of travel restrictions were introduced all over the world with many countries opting for the drastic ones – closing the borders entirely - this was ensured by the ire of residents and a solution which would meet the ends of both parties became not a prospective option, but an absolute necessity. Governments were tasked with finding a way to both keep the virus in check and retain their place at the reins of the country’s rule without being overthrown by the population. My home country, Ukraine, was no exception. During the era of digitalization, a solution was proposed as spring, 2020 took its toll on the peoples of Middle-Earth after lockdowns and fear. An app emerged which was aimed at allowing the freedom of movement under the condition of people confining themselves to their houses upon return.

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COVID-19

As the world plunged into an epidemic calamity and the, peoples' freedom of good people of Middle-Earthmovement was questioned, s. Sovereign states began to introduce various measures to prevent the spread of COVID-19.

Is this in a novel? Middle Earth often refers to Tolkien's fantasy world.

To curb the spread of the virus, all sorts of travel restrictions were introduced all over the world with m. Many countries optinged for the drastic restrictiones – closing the borders entirely - this was ensured by the ire of residents and aattracted the ire of their citizenry. A solution which would meet the ends of both parties became not a prospective option, but an absolute necessity.

This sentence is long enough that it becomes challenging to read.

Governments were tasked with finding a way to both keep the virus in check and retain their place at the reins of the country’s rule without being overthrown by the population.

My home country, Ukraine, was no exception.

During the era of digitalization, aA modern solution was proposed as spring, 2020 took its toll on the peoples of Middle-Earth after. Technology helped people through the lockdowns and fear.

An app emerged which was aimed ato allowing the freedom of movement, under the condition of people confinthat travelers quarantinge themselves to their houses uponat home once they return.

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Good job. These are some big sentences, so much of the advice is stylistic.

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artembogdan

April 3, 2021

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COVID-19


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As the world plunged into epidemic calamity and the freedom of good people of Middle-Earth was questioned, sovereign states began to introduce various measures to prevent the spread of COVID-19.


As the world plunged into an epidemic calamity and the, peoples' freedom of good people of Middle-Earthmovement was questioned, s. Sovereign states began to introduce various measures to prevent the spread of COVID-19.

Is this in a novel? Middle Earth often refers to Tolkien's fantasy world.

To curb the spread of the virus, all sorts of travel restrictions were introduced all over the world with many countries opting for the drastic ones – closing the borders entirely - this was ensured by the ire of residents and a solution which would meet the ends of both parties became not a prospective option, but an absolute necessity.


To curb the spread of the virus, all sorts of travel restrictions were introduced all over the world with m. Many countries optinged for the drastic restrictiones – closing the borders entirely - this was ensured by the ire of residents and aattracted the ire of their citizenry. A solution which would meet the ends of both parties became not a prospective option, but an absolute necessity.

This sentence is long enough that it becomes challenging to read.

Governments were tasked with finding a way to both keep the virus in check and retain their place at the reins of the country’s rule without being overthrown by the population.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My home country, Ukraine, was no exception.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

During the era of digitalization, a solution was proposed as spring, 2020 took its toll on the peoples of Middle-Earth after lockdowns and fear.


During the era of digitalization, aA modern solution was proposed as spring, 2020 took its toll on the peoples of Middle-Earth after. Technology helped people through the lockdowns and fear.

An app emerged which was aimed at allowing the freedom of movement under the condition of people confining themselves to their houses upon return.


An app emerged which was aimed ato allowing the freedom of movement, under the condition of people confinthat travelers quarantinge themselves to their houses uponat home once they return.

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