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1) Write a paragraph about the job you want in the future. (Use grammar from Units 8) (underline grammar) (20) 미래에 원하는 직업에 대한 단락을 작성하십시오. (8단원의 문법 사용) (문법에 밑줄 긋기)
I want to become a video designer who creates visually appealing content. These days, video content has
become more common and important on platforms such as YouTube and social media which explains why I
became interested in work that involves planning and designing videos. I am interested in making videos
since I like watching them. When I first started, I just put subtitles or music on videos for fun.
But the videos that got good reactions made me feel proud. So I wanted to make it better, and that's how
much I wanted to make it a job. Also, when I watched high-quality videos, I became even more interested.
While watching various artists' music videos, movies, and animations, I'll become a person who produces
videos later. Also, as much as I want to work busy at a famous design company, I hope it will be a future
job.


2) Create a short dialogue using grammar from units 10 & 12 (underline grammar) (Minimum 12 lines, maximum 16 lines) 10단원과 12단원의 문법을 사용하여 짧은 대화를 만드세요(문법에 밑줄 긋기) (최소 12줄, 최대 16줄)(20)
A: Are you interested in the cooking group? The gathering will be held next week.
B: That sounds awesome! Which group to join was what I was deciding on.
A: I see. did you use to cook food when you were in high school?
B: I used to cook in the cooking class at high school.
A: At our school today, a famous chef will be hosting a cooking show. If you’re free, want to watch it together?
B: Oh really? When is the chef arriving?
A: He might be at the studio around 5 p.m.
B: really? My plan with another friend at 5 got canceled. So are you the team leader?
A: I used to not be the team leader. But I am now, since the original one left.
B: Sure, I’ll help. Do I need to bring or prepare anything?
A: we’d better check cooking tools and ingredients before the cooking show starts.
B: Got it. Let’s go check. By the way, how many people are coming today?
A: I contacted 30 people, but most of them could come.
B: Then let’s go check the cooking tools and ingredients now.
A: Can you go there first? It’s in the building right next to this one. I must go check the lighting.
B: Sure, see you later then!


3) Write a paragraph about things that bother you about shopping (Use grammar from Unit 7)(underline grammar) 쇼핑할 때 당신을 괴롭히는 것들에 대한 문단 쓰기 (7단원의 문법 사용)(문법에 밑줄 긋기)(20)
There are several things that bother me too much when shopping. The first, I often feel uncomfortable
because the shopping mall gets too crowded with too many people. Especially when I have to wait too long
a line, I hesitate to buy. Waiting too long in line makes me lose patience, so I sometimes give up on
buying. and then when it’s too hot or I shop for a long time, I get tired and can’t keep shopping.
Also, shopping is not comfortable when it rains since it gets humid and my clothes get wet. Third, I feel
bothered when the staff are not too friendly. If they give too unfriendly directions when I ask where
something is, I have to ask again. Lastly, it is inconvenient when there are not enough items I want to buy.
Then I have to visit another store or buy online. finally, I prefer online shopping.



4) Answer the following questions in full sentences and appropriate grammar: (20)
1) What were you doing at 11:00 pm last night? I was watching a movie with my family and talking about the movie when my friend called, so I answered the phone.
2) What is something that you didn't use to like? I never used to like math and science because I couldn’t understand them easily and quickly but now I like them.
3) Where were you going to school when you learned how to read? I was going to Seoul Nowon Elementary School when I learned how to read. I learned Korean and English.
4) What did you use to do with your friends after school when you were in elementary school? I used to play soccer with my friends after school, and sometimes a few of my friends and I went to table tennis lessons together.
5) Have you ever spent too much money shopping? Yes, I have. I usually spend too much money when I shop for clothes online. I pick out the things I want first and then buy them all at once. Sometimes, I end up buying too many item
6) What will your life be like if you live alone? If I live alone, I may live a relaxed life. but I might have to do all the chores. Also, I could feel lonely without my family and friends.



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So I wanted to make ithem better, and that's how
much I wanted to make it a job.

You're referring to "videos", which is plural, so it should be "them" and not "it".

While watching various artists' music videos, movies, and animations, I decided that I'll become a person who produces
videos laterin the future.

(1) Your original sentence doesn't make complete sense. An action, such as the act of deciding, is expected with "while".
(2) "In the future" conveys a longer time period and is more appropriate here. Typically, "later" is used for much shorter time frames, such as in the phrase "I'll do my homework later at night."

Also, as much as I want to work busy at a famous design company, and I hope it will be a future
job.

(1) "As much as" is a grammatical structure similar to "despite" or "even though". It's used in situations where you have contrasting information. Consider the sentence "As much as I want to work overseas, I don't have the money to do so." Here, we see a contrast between between desire and financial ability. However, we don't see something like this in your original sentence, so "as much as" shouldn't be used.

(2) "To work busy at" isn't an expression we use. We'd just say "to work at".

Which group to join was what I was trying to decidinge on.

(1) While your original sentence isn't necessarily wrong, I think "decide on" conveys a greater sense of finality or certainty. I'd suggest "try to decide on", which is more uncertain.
(2) Alternatively: "I was trying to decide on which group to join." This expression might be more common.

dDid you use to cook food when you were in high school?

Mind the capitalisation.

If you’re free, (do you) want to watch it together?

Omitting the subject "you" and saying "want to watch it together" is more colloquial. Since you're writing conversation, I might be acceptable here, but adding "do you" would be the more grammatical expression.

A: He might be at the studio around 5 p.m.
B:
rReally?

A: I used to not be the team leader.

Alternatively, and perhaps more naturally: "I didn't use to be the team leader."

A: we’We'd better check the cooking tools and ingredients before the cooking show starts.

Using "the" would be more natural here, since you're referring to the tools and ingredients used for the cooking show specifically.

A: I contacted 30 people, but most of them couldn't come.

"But" implies contrasting information. The expectation would be that all of them would come, so the contrasting information is that most couldn't. If you'd indeed meant to say that most could come, you wouldn't use "but": "I contacted 30 people, and most of them could come."

The fFirst, I often feel uncomfortable
because the shopping mall gets too crowded with too many people.

Alternatively: "The first is (that) I often feel uncomfortable..."

Especially when I have to wait too long
in a line, I hesitate to buy.

aAnd then when it’s too hot or I shop for a long time, I get tired and can’t keep shopping.

Capitalisation.

If they give directions in too unfriendly directionsa way when I ask where
something is, I have to ask again.

"Unfriendly" is an adjective. If you want to use it to modify a verb like "give directions", you can use the structure "in a [adjective] way". If you want to use "too" in the structure, it becomes "in too [adjective] a way", though this might be more advanced.

Lastly, it is inconvenient when there are not enoughthe items I want to buy.

(1) "There are not enough items I want to buy" might moreso be interpreted to mean that you don't buy enough items, and so you want to buy more.
(2) The "the" before "items" indicates that you're referring to the items you're trying to buy specifically, rather than items in general that you happen to come across and want to buy.

finally, I prefer online shopping.

It is odd to use both "lastly" and "finally", since both indicate the final item. I'd remove "finally" here, especially because you preferring online shopping isn't exactly something that bothers you about shopping in the first place.

I was watching a movie with my family and talking about ithe movie when my friend called, so I answered the phone.

I'd suggest replacing the second "movie" with "it" to avoid unnecessary repetition of "movie".

Sometimes, I end up buying too many item s.
6) What will your life be like if you live alone?

If I live alone, I may live a relaxed life.,

I'd combine this sentence with the next one. I have replaced the period with a comma to allow for this.

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Generally, your grammar is fine, so good job! The sentences I didn't make any corrections on are correct; for the ease of reading, I just decided not to tick them since there are so many of them.

BuHowever, I realized that the videos that got goodreceived positive reactions made me feel proud.

So I wanted to make it better, andso that's how ¶
much I wanted to
I could make it a jobcareer.

WhileBy watching various artists' music videos, movies, and animations, I'll hope to become a person who produces ¶
videos later
video producer in the future.

Also, as much as I want to work busy at a famous design company, I hope it will be a future
job.

I'm not sure what the meaning is here. Could you clarify?

A: I see.


Could you please take a look at my English and let me know i


A: Can you go there first?


It’s in the building right next to this one.


I was going to Seoul Nowon Elementary School when I learned how to read.


I usually spend too much money when I shop for clothes online.


I pick out the things I want first and then buy them all at once.


Sometimes, I end up buying too many item 6) What will your life be like if you live alone?


Sometimes, I end up buying too many item s.
6) What will your life be like if you live alone?

If I live alone, I may live a relaxed life.


If I live alone, I may live a relaxed life.,

I'd combine this sentence with the next one. I have replaced the period with a comma to allow for this.

but I might have to do all the chores.


Also, I could feel lonely without my family and friends.


no AI .... please


1) Write a paragraph about the job you want in the future.


I used to play soccer with my friends after school, and sometimes a few of my friends and I went to table tennis lessons together.


5) Have you ever spent too much money shopping?


Yes, I have.


(Use grammar from Units 8) (underline grammar) (20) 미래에 원하는 직업에 대한 단락을 작성하십시오.


I am interested in making videos since I like watching them.


A: I contacted 30 people, but most of them could come.


A: I contacted 30 people, but most of them couldn't come.

"But" implies contrasting information. The expectation would be that all of them would come, so the contrasting information is that most couldn't. If you'd indeed meant to say that most could come, you wouldn't use "but": "I contacted 30 people, and most of them could come."

B: Then let’s go check the cooking tools and ingredients now.


I must go check the lighting.


B: Sure, see you later then!


3) Write a paragraph about things that bother you about shopping (Use grammar from Unit 7)(underline grammar) 쇼핑할 때 당신을 괴롭히는 것들에 대한 문단 쓰기 (7단원의 문법 사용)(문법에 밑줄 긋기)(20) There are several things that bother me too much when shopping.


The first, I often feel uncomfortable because the shopping mall gets too crowded with too many people.


The fFirst, I often feel uncomfortable
because the shopping mall gets too crowded with too many people.

Alternatively: "The first is (that) I often feel uncomfortable..."

Especially when I have to wait too long a line, I hesitate to buy.


Especially when I have to wait too long
in a line, I hesitate to buy.

Waiting too long in line makes me lose patience, so I sometimes give up on buying.


and then when it’s too hot or I shop for a long time, I get tired and can’t keep shopping.


aAnd then when it’s too hot or I shop for a long time, I get tired and can’t keep shopping.

Capitalisation.

Also, shopping is not comfortable when it rains since it gets humid and my clothes get wet.


Third, I feel bothered when the staff are not too friendly.


If they give too unfriendly directions when I ask where something is, I have to ask again.


If they give directions in too unfriendly directionsa way when I ask where
something is, I have to ask again.

"Unfriendly" is an adjective. If you want to use it to modify a verb like "give directions", you can use the structure "in a [adjective] way". If you want to use "too" in the structure, it becomes "in too [adjective] a way", though this might be more advanced.

Lastly, it is inconvenient when there are not enough items I want to buy.


Lastly, it is inconvenient when there are not enoughthe items I want to buy.

(1) "There are not enough items I want to buy" might moreso be interpreted to mean that you don't buy enough items, and so you want to buy more. (2) The "the" before "items" indicates that you're referring to the items you're trying to buy specifically, rather than items in general that you happen to come across and want to buy.

Then I have to visit another store or buy online.


finally, I prefer online shopping.


finally, I prefer online shopping.

It is odd to use both "lastly" and "finally", since both indicate the final item. I'd remove "finally" here, especially because you preferring online shopping isn't exactly something that bothers you about shopping in the first place.

4) Answer the following questions in full sentences and appropriate grammar: (20) 1) What were you doing at 11:00 pm last night?


I was watching a movie with my family and talking about the movie when my friend called, so I answered the phone.


I was watching a movie with my family and talking about ithe movie when my friend called, so I answered the phone.

I'd suggest replacing the second "movie" with "it" to avoid unnecessary repetition of "movie".

2) What is something that you didn't use to like?


(8단원의 문법 사용) (문법에 밑줄 긋기) I want to become a video designer who creates visually appealing content.


These days, video content has become more common and important on platforms such as YouTube and social media which explains why I became interested in work that involves planning and designing videos.


When I first started, I just put subtitles or music on videos for fun.


But the videos that got good reactions made me feel proud.


BuHowever, I realized that the videos that got goodreceived positive reactions made me feel proud.

So I wanted to make it better, and that's how much I wanted to make it a job.


So I wanted to make it better, andso that's how ¶
much I wanted to
I could make it a jobcareer.

So I wanted to make ithem better, and that's how
much I wanted to make it a job.

You're referring to "videos", which is plural, so it should be "them" and not "it".

Also, when I watched high-quality videos, I became even more interested.


While watching various artists' music videos, movies, and animations, I'll become a person who produces videos later.


WhileBy watching various artists' music videos, movies, and animations, I'll hope to become a person who produces ¶
videos later
video producer in the future.

While watching various artists' music videos, movies, and animations, I decided that I'll become a person who produces
videos laterin the future.

(1) Your original sentence doesn't make complete sense. An action, such as the act of deciding, is expected with "while". (2) "In the future" conveys a longer time period and is more appropriate here. Typically, "later" is used for much shorter time frames, such as in the phrase "I'll do my homework later at night."

Also, as much as I want to work busy at a famous design company, I hope it will be a future job.


Also, as much as I want to work busy at a famous design company, I hope it will be a future
job.

I'm not sure what the meaning is here. Could you clarify?

Also, as much as I want to work busy at a famous design company, and I hope it will be a future
job.

(1) "As much as" is a grammatical structure similar to "despite" or "even though". It's used in situations where you have contrasting information. Consider the sentence "As much as I want to work overseas, I don't have the money to do so." Here, we see a contrast between between desire and financial ability. However, we don't see something like this in your original sentence, so "as much as" shouldn't be used. (2) "To work busy at" isn't an expression we use. We'd just say "to work at".

2) Create a short dialogue using grammar from units 10 & 12 (underline grammar) (Minimum 12 lines, maximum 16 lines) 10단원과 12단원의 문법을 사용하여 짧은 대화를 만드세요(문법에 밑줄 긋기) (최소 12줄, 최대 16줄)(20) A: Are you interested in the cooking group?


The gathering will be held next week.


B: That sounds awesome!


Which group to join was what I was deciding on.


Which group to join was what I was trying to decidinge on.

(1) While your original sentence isn't necessarily wrong, I think "decide on" conveys a greater sense of finality or certainty. I'd suggest "try to decide on", which is more uncertain. (2) Alternatively: "I was trying to decide on which group to join." This expression might be more common.

did you use to cook food when you were in high school?


dDid you use to cook food when you were in high school?

Mind the capitalisation.

B: I used to cook in the cooking class at high school.


A: At our school today, a famous chef will be hosting a cooking show.


If you’re free, want to watch it together?


If you’re free, (do you) want to watch it together?

Omitting the subject "you" and saying "want to watch it together" is more colloquial. Since you're writing conversation, I might be acceptable here, but adding "do you" would be the more grammatical expression.

B: Oh really?


When is the chef arriving?


A: He might be at the studio around 5 p.m. B: really?


A: He might be at the studio around 5 p.m.
B:
rReally?

My plan with another friend at 5 got canceled.


So are you the team leader?


A: I used to not be the team leader.


A: I used to not be the team leader.

Alternatively, and perhaps more naturally: "I didn't use to be the team leader."

But I am now, since the original one left.


B: Sure, I’ll help.


Do I need to bring or prepare anything?


A: we’d better check cooking tools and ingredients before the cooking show starts.


A: we’We'd better check the cooking tools and ingredients before the cooking show starts.

Using "the" would be more natural here, since you're referring to the tools and ingredients used for the cooking show specifically.

B: Got it.


Let’s go check.


By the way, how many people are coming today?


I never used to like math and science because I couldn’t understand them easily and quickly but now I like them.


3) Where were you going to school when you learned how to read?


I learned Korean and English.


4) What did you use to do with your friends after school when you were in elementary school?


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