June 16, 2025
Commonly Known Facts about Aum
In 1995, a cult known as Aum Shinrikyo carried out the world’s first indiscriminate terrorist attack using chemical weapons in Japan. Fourteen people were killed and more than 6,000 were injured. Many victims still suffer from severe long-term aftereffects and neurological symptoms.
At its height, the cult’s membership exceeded 10,000, and it included a large number of highly educated followers, among them medical school graduates. Reportedly, Aum Shinrikyo attracted so many well-educated adherents because it actively recruited elite segments of society, drawing in young talent from science and engineering fields, especially chemistry.
To young people who felt stifled by corporate society and anxious about their futures, it offered salvation in the form of “escape from a corrupt society” and “the ultimate quest for truth,” thereby winning highly loyal followers.
Commonly Known Facts aAbout Aum
In 1995, a cult known as Aum Shinrikyo carried out the world’s first indiscriminate terrorist attack using chemical weapons in Japan.
Fourteen people were killed and more than 6,000 were injured.
Many victims still suffer from severe long-term aftereffects and neurological symptoms.
At its height, the cult’s membership exceeded 10,000, and it included a large number of highly educated followers, among them medical school graduates.
Reportedly, Aum Shinrikyo reportedly attracted so many well-educated adherents because it actively recruited from elite segments of society, drawing in young talent from science and engineering fields, especially chemistry.
"Reportedly" at the start of the sentence isn't wrong, but since the previous sentence also started with an introductory element, I wanted to suggest a different version that adds some variety to the sentence structure.
To young people who felt stifled by corporate societylife and anxious about their futures, it offered salvation in the form of “escape from a corrupt society” and “the ultimate quest for truth,” thereby winning highly loyal followers.
June 16, 2025
Thank you for your corrections!
In 1995, a cult known as Aum Shinrikyo carried out the world’s first indiscriminate terrorist attack using chemical weapons in Japan.
Fourteen people were killed and more than 6,000 were injured.
Many victims still suffer from severe long-term aftereffects and neurological symptoms.
I feel it would be a bit more natural to say "Many of the victims are still suffering from the severe long-term aftereffects and neurological symptoms."
At its height, the cult’s membership exceeded 10,000, and it included a large number of highly educated followers, among them medical school graduates.
Reportedly, Aum Shinrikyo attracted so many well-educated adherents because it actively recruited from elite segments of society, drawing in young talent from science and engineering fields, especially chemistry.
To young people who felt stifled by corporate society and anxious about their futures, it offered salvation in the form of an “escape from a corrupt society” and “the ultimate quest for truth,” thereby winning highly loyal followers.
June 16, 2025
Thank you for your corrections!
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Reportedly, Aum Shinrikyo attracted so many well-educated adherents because it actively recruited elite segments of society, drawing in young talent from science and engineering fields, especially chemistry. Reportedly, Aum Shinrikyo attracted so many well-educated adherents because it actively recruited from elite segments of society, drawing in young talent from science and engineering fields, especially chemistry.
"Reportedly" at the start of the sentence isn't wrong, but since the previous sentence also started with an introductory element, I wanted to suggest a different version that adds some variety to the sentence structure. |
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Many victims still suffer from severe long-term aftereffects and neurological symptoms. Many victims still suffer from severe long-term aftereffects and neurological symptoms. I feel it would be a bit more natural to say "Many of the victims are still suffering from the severe long-term aftereffects and neurological symptoms." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At its height, the cult’s membership exceeded 10,000, and it included a large number of highly educated followers, among them medical school graduates. This sentence has been marked as perfect! At its height, the cult’s membership exceeded 10,000 |
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To young people who felt stifled by corporate society and anxious about their futures, it offered salvation in the form of “escape from a corrupt society” and “the ultimate quest for truth,” thereby winning highly loyal followers. To young people who felt stifled by corporate society and anxious about their futures, it offered salvation in the form of an “escape from a corrupt society” and “the ultimate quest for truth,” thereby winning highly loyal followers. To young people who felt stifled by corporate |
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