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March 30, 2021

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City life during COVID TIME

It's been a year since the COVID outbreak shook our lives. So far, we all have experienced changes in our lifestyle, mainly in the cities.

I must admit that despite the shocking situation there are some social benefits:
- Criminal activity has slowed down.
- Less traffic, due to digital working.
- Noise pollution seems to improve. We can hear birds singing.
- Since tourist attractions are not crowded and consequently locals can enjoy them.

In the other hand, new problems arose related to general wellbeing:
- Food delivery services have increased and unfortunately some bicycles/scooters are invading pedestrian areas.
- Because of the price, common people struggle to find a house in my city. Small ones are affordable but they become claustrophobic in times of difficulties.

Today I've read in newspaper that 3 of each 10 persons declared they would like to leave behind the city to settle down in the countryside.
It's clear that despite the advantages (plenty of services and shops, huge cultural offer, etc.) cities can be harsh.

I hope that we will see an evolution in the future that leads us to sustainable and fair society.

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City life during COVID TIME

It's been a year since the COVID outbreak shook our lives.

So far, we all have experienced changes in our lifestyle, mainly in thefor people who live in cities.

I must admit that despite the shocking situation there are some social benefits:

- Criminal activity has slowed down.

- LThere is less traffic, due to digitalremote working.

I changed it to a complete sentence to match the others in the list

- Noise pollution seems to have improved.

We can hear birds singing.

- Since tourist attractions are not as crowded and, consequently locals can enjoy them.

IOn the other hand, new problems arose related to general wellbeing:

- Food delivery services have increased; and unfortunately, some bicycles/scooters are invading pedestrian areas.

- Because of thehigh prices, commonregular people struggle to find a house in my city.

Small ones are affordable, but they can become claustrophobic in times of difficultiesy.

you could also say 'difficult times.'

Today I've read in a newspaper that 3 of each 10 persons10 people declared they would like to leave behind their city behind to settle down in the countrysidesuburbs.

It's clear that despite the advantages (plenty of services and shops, huge cultural offer, etc.) cities can be harsh.

I hope that we will see an evolution in the future that leads us to a sustainable and fair society.

City life during COVID TIME


City life during COVID TIME

It's been a year since the COVID outbreak shook our lives.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So far, we all have experienced changes in our lifestyle, mainly in the cities.


So far, we all have experienced changes in our lifestyle, mainly in thefor people who live in cities.

I must admit that despite the shocking situation there are some social benefits:


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Criminal activity has slowed down.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Less traffic, due to digital working.


- LThere is less traffic, due to digitalremote working.

I changed it to a complete sentence to match the others in the list

- Noise pollution seems to improve.


- Noise pollution seems to have improved.

We can hear birds singing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Since tourist attractions are not crowded and consequently locals can enjoy them.


- Since tourist attractions are not as crowded and, consequently locals can enjoy them.

In the other hand, new problems arose related to general wellbeing:


IOn the other hand, new problems arose related to general wellbeing:

- Food delivery services have increased and unfortunately some bicycles/scooters are invading pedestrian areas.


- Food delivery services have increased; and unfortunately, some bicycles/scooters are invading pedestrian areas.

- Because of the price, common people struggle to find a house in my city.


- Because of thehigh prices, commonregular people struggle to find a house in my city.

Small ones are affordable but they become claustrophobic in times of difficulties.


Small ones are affordable, but they can become claustrophobic in times of difficultiesy.

you could also say 'difficult times.'

Today I've read in newspaper that 3 of each 10 persons declared they would like to leave behind the city to settle down in the countryside.


Today I've read in a newspaper that 3 of each 10 persons10 people declared they would like to leave behind their city behind to settle down in the countrysidesuburbs.

It's clear that despite the advantages (plenty of services and shops, huge cultural offer, etc.) cities can be harsh.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope that we will see an evolution in the future that leads us to sustainable and fair society.


I hope that we will see an evolution in the future that leads us to a sustainable and fair society.

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