Sept. 2, 2025
Choosing to Study in a Technical Secondary School
During my middle school graduation exam, I achieved the highest scores in my school. As a result, I had two options: to attend the top high school in my city or to enroll in a technical secondary school.
Choosing the technical secondary school meant that the government would assign me a job immediately upon graduation.
If I opted for the top high school, I would not be guaranteed a government job unless I passed the college entrance exam. Failing the exam would mean returning to my village to work as a farmer for the rest of my life.
Ultimately, I chose the technical secondary school in my city. Few people were willing to take the risk of spending three more years in high school when a government job was already within reach.
The technical secondary school I attended specialized in agricultural machinery, and my major was agricultural machinery management.
Upon graduating, I was assigned to a county seat in my province to work as a tutor for agricultural machinery operators.
This path led to my current job and explains why I did not pursue high school or university education.
Choosing to Study in a Technical Secondary School
During my middle school graduation exam, I achieved the highest scores in my school.
As a result, I had two options: to attend the top high school in my city or to enroll in a technical secondary school.
Choosing the technical secondary school meant that the government would assign me a job immediately upon graduation.
If I opted for the top high school, I would not be guaranteed a government job unless I passed the college entrance exam.
Failing the exam would mean returning to my village to work as a farmer for the rest of my life.
Ultimately, I chose the technical secondary school in my city.
Few people were willing to take the risk of spending three more years in high school when a government job was already within reach.
The technical secondary school I attended specialized in agricultural machinery, and my major was agricultural machinery management.
Upon graduating, I was assigned to a county seat in my province to work as a tutor for agricultural machinery operators.
This path led to my current job and explains why I did not pursue high school or university education.
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Sept. 3, 2025
Thank you very much.
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During my middle school graduation exam, I achieved the highest scores in my school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Few people were willing to take the risk of spending three more years in high school when a government job was already within reach. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The technical secondary school I attended specialized in agricultural machinery, and my major was agricultural machinery management. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Upon graduating, I was assigned to a county seat in my province to work as a tutor for agricultural machinery operators. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This path led to my current job and explains why I did not pursue high school or university education. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As a result, I had two options: to attend the top high school in my city or to enroll in a technical secondary school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Choosing the technical secondary school meant that the government would assign me a job immediately upon graduation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I opted for the top high school, I would not be guaranteed a government job unless I passed the college entrance exam. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Failing the exam would mean returning to my village to work as a farmer for the rest of my life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Ultimately, I chose the technical secondary school in my city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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