cChoose a name

Today，iI have a new name，i am which I choose name for onemyself，. It’s Lris.

Beacuse my Chinese name one is "Hong（rainbow）" inside .

But iI don't’t kown my new name ，does it sound strange?

Today，i, I have a new name，i am, I have choosen a name for onemyself，, Lris.

English uses the single width comma "," not a double width comma.

Beacause my Chinese name cone istains the character for "Hong（ (rainbow）" inside )".

But iI don't known about my new name, ，does it sound strange?

Since you mentioned in a previous post you mentioned wanting to pick an English name, but Lris doesn't read as an English name (and actually is more challenging for English speakers than Hong) to pronounce, as we don't really have the "lr" combination in English.

Perhaps you were looking up Iris? That is a more common name, but note it starts with an I not an L. It can be confusing because the capital I looks like the lowercase l.

cChoose name

Today，i have, I got a new name，i am. I choose a name for onemyself，, Lris.

Beacause my Chinese name one is "Hong（rainbow）" inside" .

But iI don't known about my new name, ，does it sound strange?

cChoose ning a Name

(1) I reworded the title so that it sounds more natural.
(2) Typically, all words in a title are capitalised.

Today，i, I have a new name，i am. The name I choose name for onemyself， is Lris.,

(1) The pronoun "I" is always capitalised.
(2) I think the writing will flow better if this sentence is split into two. I would also suggest merging the second half with the next sentence, so I replaced the period at the end with a comma.

Beacbecause my Chinese name one ishas the character "Hhong（" (rainbow）") inside (it).

As mentioned earlier, I'd suggest merging this sentence with the one above. Therefore, I uncapitalised "because".

But iI don't known, does my new name ，does it sound strange?