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SummerTeaWater

May 5, 2021

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Children's day

In Korea, there is a special day for celebrating kids in May 5th.

Because every kid is a future of the country, parents take them out to do whatever they want.

When I was young, my family used to participate in a sport event of my elementary school.

I could buy many toys and ate tasty lunch there.

Because of the pandemic, there is no sport event for my kids this year.

I am a shame that my kids can't have a special memory of the Children's day.

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Children's dDay

The full name of holidays is capitalized.

In Korea, there is a special day for celebrating kids ion May 5th.

Because every kid is are the future of the country, parents take them out to do whatever they want.

When I was young, my family used to participate in a sport event ofat my elementary school.

I could buy many toys and eate tasty lunches there.

Because of the pandemic, there is no sport event for my kids this year.

I amt's a shame that my kids can't have a special memory of theis Children's dDay.

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elonmusk

May 5, 2021

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Hopefully you can still find something nice to do with your kids.

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SummerTeaWater

May 6, 2021

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Thank you very much

Children's day


Children's dDay

The full name of holidays is capitalized.

In Korea, there is a special day for celebrating kids in May 5th.


In Korea, there is a special day for celebrating kids ion May 5th.

Because every kid is a future of the country, parents take them out to do whatever they want.


Because every kid is are the future of the country, parents take them out to do whatever they want.

When I was young, my family used to participate in a sport event of my elementary school.


When I was young, my family used to participate in a sport event ofat my elementary school.

I could buy many toys and ate tasty lunch there.


I could buy many toys and eate tasty lunches there.

Because of the pandemic, there is no sport event for my kids this year.


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I am a shame that my kids can't have a special memory of the Children's day.


I amt's a shame that my kids can't have a special memory of theis Children's dDay.

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