May 11, 2025
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In the contemporary era, it is widely accepted that the way you can be fashionable is following the current trends of dressing. As far as i am concerned, i certainly agree with this trends due to its coverage and suitable for each one's styles.
As i am aforementioned, the huge fame can have significant influence on most of people, making them would like to buy some unique accessories the same as their idols or basically their friends. For instance, recently, there is a rapid rise of “baggy styles” or “minimalists styles”, which suit for most of people, especially teenagers. Furthermore, these clothes simply look like the same, which lead to people's outfits are resemble and these styles are more and more well-known. Therefore, the more people dress the same the more famous the fashion becomes.
In addition, the appropriation of the outfits at all ages make it more and more convenient and comfortable, that means the majority of people can wear the same when they go outside and the images of that fashions can be promoted. For example, a basic style with a t-shirt and pants can be dressed widely by several people, simultaneously, promoting the tendency and the way people wear. Hence, the suitability also plays a necessary role in awareness.
In conclusion, when you see many copies of outfits that means that fashions was success in promoting. Consequently, i definitely agree with this statement.
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In the (modern / contemporary) era, it is widely accepted that the way you can be fashionable is by following the current trends of dressingfashion trends.
Modern is probably better than contemporary here.
As far as iI am concerned, iI certainly agree with this trends due to its coverage and suitable for each one's styleswidespread applicability.
As i am aforeI previously mentioned, the hugewidespread fame can have significant influence on most of people, makcausing them would liketo want to buy some unique accessories that are the same as their idols or basically their friends.
Aforementioned is normally used as an adjective, and to the thing that that was previously mentioned, not to the person who previously mentioned it. You wouldn't use it as a verb.
If they accessories are the same as those owned by their idols or their friends, then they're not unique.
From a writing point of view, you also didn't really mention the fame.
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I tried not to totally rewrite the sentence so you can compare the pieces that are corrected, but the following would be more natural, I think:
> The trends that I previously mentioned can significantly influence people, causing them to buy accessories that match their idols or friends
For instance, recently, there ishas been a rapid rise of “baggy styles” or “minimalists styles”, which suit for most of people, especially teenagers.
Furthermore, these clothes simply look like the samelook similar, which leads to people's picking outfits arethat resemble andeach other, causing these styles arto become more and more well-known.
In addition, the appropriadoption of the outfits atby people of all ages makes it more and more convenient and comfortable, that.¶
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This means the majority of people can wear the same when they go outside and the images of thatat style of fashions can be promoted.
I'm not fully sure if you made the point you intended here. I'm not sure why people of all ages wearing the style would make the style more comfortable.
For example, a basic style with a t-shirt and pants can be dressed widelyworn by several people, simultaneously, promoting the tendency and the way people wear.which promotes that style further
"to dress X" = "to put clothes on X" - e.g. "to dress a baby" would be to put clothes on the baby. There's also "to dress a wound" which is to put bandages on a wound.
"to dress in X" = "to wear X" - e.g. "to dress in a suit" would be to wear a suit.
However, in this case I think it's better to stick with the simpler word.
Hence, the suitabilityversatility of a style also plays a necessary role in awareness of that style.
In conclusion, when you see many copies ofpeople wearing similar outfits that means that fashions was success infully promotinged.
Consequently, iI definitely agree with this statement.
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This piece was actually quite hard to follow. When you're talking about agreeing with a trend, that means you approve of it in some way, and would lead me to expect you're going to describe why it's good for people that the trend exists. Instead you seem to talk about why it's good for the trend itself. This might be the kind of view you might have if you were talking from the point of view of a fashion designer who inherently wants the trend to succeed so they can sell more outfits, but in that case it would be good to tie the arguments to the positive outcome.
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There's a lot more that could be corrected in this piece in terms of making it more natural and fluent, and also a better argument, but I restricted myself to correcting incorrect grammar and word usage so as not to rewrite the whole piece. I see it's your first submission, so don't feel too disheartened by that, the more you get used to writing in English, the more you'll pick up on what phrases are natural. It may also help to read some English if you don't already to see what phrases other people use.
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In the contemporary era, it is widely accepted that the way you can be fashionable is by following the current trends of dressing.
Alternatively, and more succinctly: "by following the current dressing trends."
As far as iI am concerned, iI certainly agree with thispprove of these trends due to itstheir coverage and suitableility for each oneindividual's styles(s).
(1) "I" is always capitalised.
(2) "Agree with" is okay I think, but consider "approve of".
(3) It should be "these" instead of "this", and "their" instead of "its", since "trends" is plural.
(4) "Styles" can be made singular, since everyone presumably has only one style, which is their own. The plural is also fine though.
As i am aforementioned, the huge fame can have significant influence on most of people, making them wouldmore likely to buy some uniquthe same accessories the same asworn by their idols or basically their friends.
(1) Alternatively, instead of "As aforementioned": "As I have mentioned before". In any case, "I" and "aforementioned" never appear together. Also, I don't think you'd brought up the topic of fame prior to this, so there may be some logical gap there.
(2) I omitted "unique" entirely, because I don't think it makes too much sense in this sentence. If the very same accessory is also worn by their idols or friends, is it really unique?
For instance, recently, there ishas been a rapid rise of “baggy styles” or “minimalists styles”, which suit for most of people, especially teenagers.
Furthermore, these clothes simply look like the same, which leads to people's outfits are resembleing one another and these styles arebecoming more and more well-known.
"Lead" should be in the singular form "leads", as the fact that "these clothes simply look the same" is one fact and therefore singular.
Therefore, the more people dress the same, the more famous the fashion becomes.
Consider a comma here.
In addition, the appropriation of the outfits atoutfits being appropriate for all ages make it more ands them more convenient and comfortable, thatwhich means the majority of people can wear the same thing when they go outside and the images of that fashions can be promoted.
(1) appropriate: take (something) for one's own use, typically without the owner's permission.
(2) It should be "makes" instead of "make" for the same reason it was "leads" instead of "lead" in a previous correction.
(3) It should be "them" instead of "it", since "outfits" is plural.
For example, a basic style with a tT-shirt and pants can be dressedworn widely by severalmany people, simultaneously, promoting the influencing people's tendencyies and the way people wearthey dress.
several: more than two but not many. Emphasis on the "but not many" part. "Many" is therefore a better choice.
Hence, the suitability of a fashion also plays a necessaryn important role in awareness.
I added "of a fashion" so as to make clear to the reader what "the suitability" refers to. Of course I can understand what you mean, but I nevertheless think it's a worthwhile addition, based on my own experience reading this essay of yours.
In conclusion, when you see many copies of outfits, that means that fashions was successful in promoting itself.
It should be "fashion" instead of "fashions", since "that" and "was" are singular.
ConsequentlyTherefore, iI definitely agree with this statement.
(1) "Consequently" is moreso used to establish cause-and-effect relationships involving factors out of your own control. "Therefore" is hence a better choice.
(2) It's not made known what "this statement" is. But I will assume that this post was only one section of a larger essay you wrote, which is why there seems to be references to things unmentioned, such as when you wrote "As aforementioned, the huge fame..."
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As a side note, "fashion" can be both countable and uncountable. When countable, it refers to "a popular or the latest style of clothing, hair, decoration, or behaviour", so you're using it right. You need not say "fashion style" as some have suggested, though that wouldn't be wrong either.
In the contemporary era, it is widely accepted that the way you canto be fashionable is to following the current trends of dressing.
You can understand this sentence easily as you wrote it, but it's not the way a native speaker would write it.
As far as iI am concerned, i certainlyI agree with thisese trends due to itstheir coverage and because they are suitable for each veryone's styles.
Capitalize "I", use "these" when referring to plural nouns. Use "their" as the possessive plural pronoun. You could also say "due to their coverage and their suitability for"
As i am aforeI previously mentioned, the huge fame can have a significant influence on most of people, making them wouldmore likely to buy some unique accessories the same aso match their idols or basically their friends.
"the huge fame" isn't really an expression people use in English. You might say something like "the popularity".
For instance, recently, there is a rapid rise of “baggy styles” or “minimalists styles”, which suit for most of people, especially teenagers.
Furthermore, these clothes simply look like the same, which lead to people's outfits are resembleing each other and these styles arbecome more and more well-known.
Therefore, the more people dress the same the more famouswell-known the fashion becomes.
"famous" is used for people and objects, while an expression like "well-known" or "popular" would be used for trends.
In addition, the appropriation of the outfits at all ages make it more and more convenient and comfortable, thatwhich means the majority of people can wear the same when they go outside and the images of that fashions can be promoted.
For example, a basic style with a t-shirt and pants can be dressedworn widely by several people, simultaneously, promoting the trendency and the way people weardress.
In conclusion, when you see many copies of outfits that means that fashions was success in promotingpromoted successfully.
Consequently, iI definitely agree with this statement.
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Very well written overall! For the most part I could understand everything.
CPlease check and correction of my essays pls
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Hence, the suitability also plays a necessary role in awareness.
In conclusion, when you see manyultiple copies of outfits that means that fashions w style has success infully promotinged itself.
ConsequentlyTherefore, iI definitely agree with this statement.
This would sound better.
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In the contemporary era, it is widely accepted that the way you can be fashionable is following the current trends of dressing. In the contemporary era, it In the contemporary era, it is widely accepted that the way You can understand this sentence easily as you wrote it, but it's not the way a native speaker would write it. In the contemporary era, it is widely accepted that the way you can be fashionable is by following the current trends of dressing. Alternatively, and more succinctly: "by following the current dressing trends." In the (modern / contemporary) era, it is widely accepted that the way you can be fashionable is by following the current Modern is probably better than contemporary here. |
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As far as i am concerned, i certainly agree with this trends due to its coverage and suitable for each one's styles. As far as I is always capitalized. As far as Capitalize "I", use "these" when referring to plural nouns. Use "their" as the possessive plural pronoun. You could also say "due to their coverage and their suitability for" As far as (1) "I" is always capitalised. (2) "Agree with" is okay I think, but consider "approve of". (3) It should be "these" instead of "this", and "their" instead of "its", since "trends" is plural. (4) "Styles" can be made singular, since everyone presumably has only one style, which is their own. The plural is also fine though. As far as |
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As i am aforementioned, the huge fame can have significant influence on most of people, making them would like to buy some unique accessories the same as their idols or basically their friends. As As "the huge fame" isn't really an expression people use in English. You might say something like "the popularity". As (1) Alternatively, instead of "As aforementioned": "As I have mentioned before". In any case, "I" and "aforementioned" never appear together. Also, I don't think you'd brought up the topic of fame prior to this, so there may be some logical gap there. (2) I omitted "unique" entirely, because I don't think it makes too much sense in this sentence. If the very same accessory is also worn by their idols or friends, is it really unique? As Aforementioned is normally used as an adjective, and to the thing that that was previously mentioned, not to the person who previously mentioned it. You wouldn't use it as a verb. If they accessories are the same as those owned by their idols or their friends, then they're not unique. From a writing point of view, you also didn't really mention the fame. --- I tried not to totally rewrite the sentence so you can compare the pieces that are corrected, but the following would be more natural, I think: > The trends that I previously mentioned can significantly influence people, causing them to buy accessories that match their idols or friends |
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Furthermore, these clothes simply look like the same, which lead to people's outfits are resemble and these styles are more and more well-known. Furthermore, these clothes simply look Furthermore, these clothes simply look Furthermore, these clothes simply look "Lead" should be in the singular form "leads", as the fact that "these clothes simply look the same" is one fact and therefore singular. Furthermore, these clothes |
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Therefore, the more people dress the same the more famous the fashion becomes. Therefore, the more people Therefore, the more people dress the same the more "famous" is used for people and objects, while an expression like "well-known" or "popular" would be used for trends. Therefore, the more people dress the same, the more famous the fashion becomes. Consider a comma here. |
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In addition, the appropriation of the outfits at all ages make it more and more convenient and comfortable, that means the majority of people can wear the same when they go outside and the images of that fashions can be promoted. In addition, the In addition, the appropriation of the outfits at all ages make it more and more convenient and comfortable, In addition, the (1) appropriate: take (something) for one's own use, typically without the owner's permission. (2) It should be "makes" instead of "make" for the same reason it was "leads" instead of "lead" in a previous correction. (3) It should be "them" instead of "it", since "outfits" is plural. In addition, the a I'm not fully sure if you made the point you intended here. I'm not sure why people of all ages wearing the style would make the style more comfortable. |
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For example, a basic style with a t-shirt and pants can be dressed widely by several people, simultaneously, promoting the tendency and the way people wear. For example, a basic For example, a basic style with a t-shirt and pants can be For example, a basic style with a several: more than two but not many. Emphasis on the "but not many" part. "Many" is therefore a better choice. For example, a basic style with a t-shirt and pants can be "to dress X" = "to put clothes on X" - e.g. "to dress a baby" would be to put clothes on the baby. There's also "to dress a wound" which is to put bandages on a wound. "to dress in X" = "to wear X" - e.g. "to dress in a suit" would be to wear a suit. However, in this case I think it's better to stick with the simpler word. |
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Hence, the suitability also plays a necessary role in awareness. Hence, Hence, the suitability of a fashion also plays a I added "of a fashion" so as to make clear to the reader what "the suitability" refers to. Of course I can understand what you mean, but I nevertheless think it's a worthwhile addition, based on my own experience reading this essay of yours. Hence, the |
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Consequently, i definitely agree with this statement.
This would sound better. Consequently,
(1) "Consequently" is moreso used to establish cause-and-effect relationships involving factors out of your own control. "Therefore" is hence a better choice. (2) It's not made known what "this statement" is. But I will assume that this post was only one section of a larger essay you wrote, which is why there seems to be references to things unmentioned, such as when you wrote "As aforementioned, the huge fame..." Consequently, |
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