Aug. 10, 2021
Changing My Routines
Everyday I mull over changing my routines.
Because I want to have a go at learning drawing, but I don't have enough time.
There are already a lot of routines like learning English, reading books, exercising, taking care of my sons and so on.
Even though I bought paints, brushes and colored pencils, I can't use them.
If I will get a higher score on an English test, I can split routines to make extra time.
It is the time to learn drawing.
I hope I will be able to catch both rabbits at the end.
Changing My Routines
Everyday I mull over changing my routines.
Because I want to have a go at learning to drawing, but I don't have enough time.
Your original sentence is also correct! This is just another way to say it.
There areI already have a lot of routines like learning English, reading books, exercising, taking care of my sons and so on.
Original sentence is also OK, but using "I" sounds more natural to me.
If I will get a higher score on anthe English test, I can split routines to make extra time.
It is the time to learn to drawing.
I hope I will be able to catch both rabbits atin the end.
Feedback
It's difficult to fit all the things we *want * to do in one day when there are so many things we *have* to do. Good luck on your English test, hope you are able to start drawing soon :)
Aug. 11, 2021
Thank you very much! :)
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Changing My Routines This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Everyday I mull over changing my routines. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because I want to have a go at learning drawing, but I don't have enough time. Because I want to have a go at learning to draw Your original sentence is also correct! This is just another way to say it. |
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There are already a lot of routines like learning English, reading books, exercising, taking care of my sons and so on.
Original sentence is also OK, but using "I" sounds more natural to me. |
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Even though I bought paints, brushes and colored pencils, I can't use them. |
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If I will get a higher score on an English test, I can split routines to make extra time. If I |
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It is the time to learn drawing. It is |
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I hope I will be able to catch both rabbits at the end. I hope I will be able to catch both rabbits |
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