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June 2, 2021

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Challenge day 2 : 'The only Meal'

If I could only eat one meal for the rest of my life, what would it be? What a cruel question! I love cooking and eating.
To be honest, I think I would choose a mediterranean meal, as for example the ratatouille, or an other recipe based on vegetables, olive oil, spices and herbs. They smell like heaven and remind me of sunny holiday afternoons.
By the way, I think they are very healthy. It is definitely a parameter we would have to take into account in the event we have to rely on it for our everyday source of energy. That is also why the answer to today's question should not be "tiramisu", as much as I regret it.

To not be honest -- and honestly, I don't want to be honest -- there is also the possibility to cheat a bit with the question. If instead of choosing one recipe, I would choose a category of meals? I would decide to eat every day only pizzas or buckwheat-based pancakes. And every day I would put on a different ingredient. A pizza stays a pizza, right? Some geniuses even created Hawaii pizzas by adding pineapples to margaritas.
I can't wait to try my new concept of buckwheat-based pizza with one half covered with ratatouille and the over half with mascarpone and coffee! And of course, you will be the first to be invited to share it with me :b

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Challenge day 2 : 'The only Meal'

If I could only eat one meal for the rest of my life, what would it be?

What a cruel question!

I love cooking and eating.

To be honest, I think I would choose a mediterranean meal, as for example the ratatouille, or an other recipe based on vegetables, olive oil, spices and herbs.

They smell like heaven and remind me of sunny holiday afternoons.

By the way, I think they are very healthy.

It is definitely a parameterthing we would have to take into account in the event we have to rely on it for our everyday source of energy.

The use of the word parameter is a bit formal for a sentence like this. It's not incorrect but i think most english people would use a more common word like thing

That is also why the answer to today's question should not be "tiramisu", as much as I regret it.

To not be honest -- and honestly, I don't want to be honest -- there is also the possibility to cheat a bit with the question.

If instead of choosing one recipe, I would choose a category of meals?

I would decide to eat every day only pizzas or buckwheat-based pancakes.

And every day I would put on a different ingredient.

A pizza stays a pizza, right?

Some geniuses even created Hawaii pizzas by adding pineapples to margaritas.

I can't wait to try my new concept of buckwheat-based pizza with one half covered with ratatouille and the over half with mascarpone and coffee!

And of course, you will be the first to be invited to share it with me :b

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An excellent bit of writing. Funny, well thought out and good grammar. Better than most english people could write - well done

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Uhu

June 2, 2021

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Aw thank you, I'm blushing. Well I put efforts in this one because the question was inspiring !

By the way, I think they are very healthy.


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Challenge day 2 : 'The only Meal'


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If I could only eat one meal for the rest of my life, what would it be?


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What a cruel question!


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I love cooking and eating.


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To be honest, I think I would choose a mediterranean meal, as for example the ratatouille, or an other recipe based on vegetables, olive oil, spices and herbs.


To be honest, I think I would choose a mediterranean meal, as for example the ratatouille, or an other recipe based on vegetables, olive oil, spices and herbs.

They smell like heaven and remind me of sunny holiday afternoons.


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It is definitely a parameter we would have to take into account in the event we have to rely on it for our everyday source of energy.


It is definitely a parameterthing we would have to take into account in the event we have to rely on it for our everyday source of energy.

The use of the word parameter is a bit formal for a sentence like this. It's not incorrect but i think most english people would use a more common word like thing

That is also why the answer to today's question should not be "tiramisu", as much as I regret it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To not be honest -- and honestly, I don't want to be honest -- there is also the possibility to cheat a bit with the question.


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If instead of choosing one recipe, I would choose a category of meals?


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I would decide to eat every day only pizzas or buckwheat-based pancakes.


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And every day I would put on a different ingredient.


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A pizza stays a pizza, right?


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Some geniuses even created Hawaii pizzas by adding pineapples to margaritas.


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I can't wait to try my new concept of buckwheat-based pizza with one half covered with ratatouille and the over half with mascarpone and coffee!


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And of course, you will be the first to be invited to share it with me :b


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