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CHALLENGE 12: Dream Home

Three years ago I went to see a concert in Shanghai. I like the room where I stayed only one night. The room was actually very small, but quite functional. In addition to the bathroom facilities, there was a refrigerator, washing machine, TV, small sofa, table, carpet, bookshelf, etc.. To be honest I like the bed the most, it is the kind of bed on top, the bottom is a shelf, where you can put clothes and books and so on, and you can sit on the floor to read things.

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CHALLENGE 12: Dream Home

Three years ago I went to see a concert in Shanghai.

I liked the room where I stayed onlyI stayed in even though I only stayed in it for one night.

The room was actually very small, but quite functional.

In addition to the bathroom facilities, there was a refrigerator, washing machine, TV, small sofa, table, carpet, bookshelf, etc.. To be honest I liked the bed the most, it i. It was the kind of bed on top, the bottom is a shelf, where you canwith the mattress on top and a shelf in the bottom. You could put clothes and books and so on, and you c in the shelf and sit on the floor to read things.

If by carpet you mean the whole floor was carpet (as opposed to there being a carpet on some other kind of flooring) you need to say something like "carpetting" without the "a" like this: "a refrigerator, a washing machine, a TV, a small sofa, a table, carpetting, a bookshelf, etc."

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heyyawn

June 12, 2021

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CHALLENGE 12: Dream Home


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Three years ago I went to see a concert in Shanghai.


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I like the room where I stayed only one night.


I liked the room where I stayed onlyI stayed in even though I only stayed in it for one night.

The room was actually very small, but quite functional.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In addition to the bathroom facilities, there was a refrigerator, washing machine, TV, small sofa, table, carpet, bookshelf, etc.. To be honest I like the bed the most, it is the kind of bed on top, the bottom is a shelf, where you can put clothes and books and so on, and you can sit on the floor to read things.


In addition to the bathroom facilities, there was a refrigerator, washing machine, TV, small sofa, table, carpet, bookshelf, etc.. To be honest I liked the bed the most, it i. It was the kind of bed on top, the bottom is a shelf, where you canwith the mattress on top and a shelf in the bottom. You could put clothes and books and so on, and you c in the shelf and sit on the floor to read things.

If by carpet you mean the whole floor was carpet (as opposed to there being a carpet on some other kind of flooring) you need to say something like "carpetting" without the "a" like this: "a refrigerator, a washing machine, a TV, a small sofa, a table, carpetting, a bookshelf, etc."

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