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Causes of Global Warming

Lately , Global Warming increases because humans are unconscious. One of most significant reasons is that people usually use fossil fuels and that causes air pollition. In addition,the atmosphore is destroyed by air pollution. For instance, humans use diesel or gasoline cars instead of electricity. Also, they use individual cars instead of public transportation .In this way, , air pollution may increase more. Another reason is that people cause water pollution.For example, some factories release harmful wastes into the environment and they are usually water area such as lakes ,rivers, seas ,and so on.In breif, people harm themselves because this environment is their future, so they have to be careful doing everything about environment.

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Causes of Global Warming

Lately , Gglobal Wwarming increasesd because humans are unconscioucareless.

One of the most significant reasons is that people usually use fossil fuels and that causes air polliution.

In addiBecause of air pollution,the atmosphoere is destroyed by air pollutionamaged.

"In addition" means you defined a previous result of air pollution, but only it's definition was written.

For instance, humans use diesel or gasoline cars instead of electricity.

Also, they use individual cars instead of public transportation . In this way, , air pollution may increases even more.

Individual is unnecessary in this case.

Another reason is that people cause water pollution. For example, some factories release harmful wastes into the environment and they are usually near water areasources such as lakes , rivers, seas , and so on. In breif, peopleconclusion, people actually harm themselves becauseas this environment is their future, so they have to be careful doing everything aboutsensitive regarding the environment.

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Causes of Global Warming


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Lately , Global Warming increases because humans are unconscious.


Lately , Gglobal Wwarming increasesd because humans are unconscioucareless.

One of most significant reasons is that people usually use fossil fuels and that causes air pollition.


One of the most significant reasons is that people usually use fossil fuels and that causes air polliution.

In addition,the atmosphore is destroyed by air pollution.


In addiBecause of air pollution,the atmosphoere is destroyed by air pollutionamaged.

"In addition" means you defined a previous result of air pollution, but only it's definition was written.

For instance, humans use diesel or gasoline cars instead of electricity.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, they use individual cars instead of public transportation .In this way, , air pollution may increase more.


Also, they use individual cars instead of public transportation . In this way, , air pollution may increases even more.

Individual is unnecessary in this case.

Another reason is that people cause water pollution.For example, some factories release harmful wastes into the environment and they are usually water area such as lakes ,rivers, seas ,and so on.In breif, people harm themselves because this environment is their future, so they have to be careful doing everything about environment.


Another reason is that people cause water pollution. For example, some factories release harmful wastes into the environment and they are usually near water areasources such as lakes , rivers, seas , and so on. In breif, peopleconclusion, people actually harm themselves becauseas this environment is their future, so they have to be careful doing everything aboutsensitive regarding the environment.

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