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April 23, 2021

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Carbohydrates

Carbohydrates (sugars) are an important energy source and half of the daily energy intake should derive from carbohydrates

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Carbohydrates

Carbohydrates (sugars) are an important energy source and h. Half of the body's daily energy intake should derive from carbohydrates.

I feel this phrase is best split into two sentences. Also, I added "the body" to specify "which" daily energy intake. Otherwise, very good!

Carbohydrates


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Carbohydrates (sugars) are an important energy source and half of the daily energy intake should derive from carbohydrates


Carbohydrates (sugars) are an important energy source and h. Half of the body's daily energy intake should derive from carbohydrates.

I feel this phrase is best split into two sentences. Also, I added "the body" to specify "which" daily energy intake. Otherwise, very good!

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