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Modern danger for wild birds

Main idea of the text "Preventing Bird Injury" is the danger for wild birds of using the transparent glass in modern architecture. The lecture was fully about explaining the arguments against the solutions provided in this text. First mentioned solution is to use One-Way Glass instead of regular glass. This type of glass is transparent in only one direction, and for birds this glass would looks like a solid barier outside of the building. This would be a great idea, but a speaker said that it won't works effectively because the building will be like a huge mirror for birds that will see mirrors of trees and skies in it and will try to fly through it. Second proposed solution is to paint colorful designs on regular window glass to make it looks like a solid object for birds was also commented by a speaker that said that gaps beetwen paintigs on the glass may be recognized by birds as open holes. The third solution is to use natural ability of birds to sense Earth's magnetic field to guide them away of the building by creating artificial magnetic field around the building. Unfortunately, as speaker said, this solution also won't work well because birds use this ability only for travelling on a very long distances

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Modern danger for wild birds


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Main idea of the text "Preventing Bird Injury" is the danger for wild birds of using the transparent glass in modern architecture.


MThe main idea of the text "Preventing Bird Injury" is the danger for wild birds of using the transparent glass in modern architecture. The main idea of the text "Preventing Bird Injury" is the danger for wild birds of using transparent glass in modern architecture.

MThe main idea of the text "Preventing Bird Injury" is about the danger forto wild birds of using the transparent glass in modern architecture. The main idea of the text "Preventing Bird Injury" is about the danger to wild birds of using transparent glass in modern architecture.

Danger of something, danger to something. Danger of cars to children - danger of glass to birds etc.

The lecture was fully about explaining the arguments against the solutions provided in this text.


The lecture was fulentirely about explaining the arguments against the solutions provided in this text. The lecture was entirely about the arguments against the solutions provided in this text.

The lecture was fully about explaining the arguments against the solutions provided in this text. The lecture was about explaining the arguments against the solutions provided in this text.

Are we talking about a lecture or a text? You’ve two man subjects you’re discussing so clarify.

First mentioned solution is to use One-Way Glass instead of regular glass.


FThe first mentioned solution is to use One-Way Glass instead of regular glass. The first mentioned solution is to use One-Way Glass instead of regular glass.

FThe first mensolutioned solution is to use One-Way Glass instead of regular glass. The first solution solution is to use One-Way Glass instead of regular glass.

Tenses in this passage are a bit muddled, gone from past tense to present tense.

This type of glass is transparent in only one direction, and for birds this glass would looks like a solid barier outside of the building.


This type of glass is transparent in only one direction, and for birds this glass would looks like a solid barrier outside of the building. This type of glass is transparent in only one direction, and for birds this glass would looks like a solid barrier outside of the building.

This type of glass is transparent in only one direction, and for birds this glass would looks like a solid barrier outside of the building. This type of glass is transparent in only one direction, and for birds this glass would looks like a solid barrier outside of the building.

Minor :)

This would be a great idea, but a speaker said that it won't works effectively because the building will be like a huge mirror for birds that will see mirrors of trees and skies in it and will try to fly through it.


This would be a great idea, but athe speaker said that it won't works effectively because the building will be like a huge mirror for birds that, who will see mirrorimages of trees and skies in it and will try to fly through it. This would be a great idea, but the speaker said that it won't work effectively because the building will be like a huge mirror for birds, who will see images of trees and skies in it and will try to fly through.

This would be a great idea, but a/the speaker said that it won'uldn’t works effectively because the building willould be like a huge mirror for birds that will see mirrorsthe reflection of trees and skiesy in it and will try to fly through it. This would be a great idea, but a/the speaker said that it wouldn’t work effectively because the building would be like a huge mirror for birds that will see the reflection of trees and sky in it and try to fly through it.

Second proposed solution is to paint colorful designs on regular window glass to make it looks like a solid object for birds was also commented by a speaker that said that gaps beetwen paintigs on the glass may be recognized by birds as open holes.


SThe second proposed solution is to paint colorful designs on regular window glass to make it looks like a solid object for birds was also commented by a speaker that sai. The speaker commented that gaps beetween paintings on the glass may be recognized by birds as open holes. The second proposed solution is to paint colorful designs on regular window glass to make it look like a solid object for birds. The speaker commented that gaps between paintings on the glass may be recognized by birds as open holes.

SThe second proposed solution is/was to paint colorful designs on regular window glass to make it looks like a solid object for birds was also commented by a speaker. A speaker/lecturer commented that said that gaps beetween the paintings on the glass may be recognized by birds as open holes. The second proposed solution is/was to paint colorful designs on regular windows to make it looks like a solid object for birds. A speaker/lecturer commented that said gaps between the paintings on the glass may be recognized by birds as open holes.

If you’re talking about who’s commenting, you need to reference who, at the minute it seems like the birds are commenting

The third solution is to use natural ability of birds to sense Earth's magnetic field to guide them away of the building by creating artificial magnetic field around the building.


The third solution is to use the natural ability of birds to sense Earth's magnetic field to guide them away ofrom the building by creating an artificial magnetic field around the building. The third solution is to use the natural ability of birds to sense Earth's magnetic field to guide them away from the building by creating an artificial magnetic field around the building.

Unfortunately, as speaker said, this solution also won't work well because birds use this ability only for travelling on a very long distances


Unfortunately, as the speaker said, this solution also won't work well because birds use this ability only for travelling on aver very long distances. Unfortunately, as the speaker said, this solution also won't work well because birds use this ability only for travelling over very long distances.

Unfortunately, as the speaker said, this solution also won't work well because birds use this ability only for travelling on a very long distances Unfortunately, as the speaker said, this solution also won't work well because birds use this ability only for travelling very long distances

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