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csenge_herdsman

May 3, 2021

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C1 writing

Could you help me correct these sentences in a way that sound natural?
I am on cloud nine by the mere thought of nurturing the younger generation in order to become a useful part of the social body.
In my opinion, she wishes someone trustworthy helped her unravel the discombobulating cacophony of questions in her head, giving her a silent moment of peace.

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Could you help me correct these sentences in a way that sounds more natural?

I am on cloud nine byat the mere thought of nurturing the younger generation in order to become a useful part of the social bodmembers of society.

In my opinion, she wishes someone trustworthy could helped her unravel the discombobulating cacophony of questions in her head, giving her a silent moment of peacetranquility.

Should either be "could help her" or "had helped her."

C1 writing


Could you help me correct these sentences in a way that sound natural?


Could you help me correct these sentences in a way that sounds more natural?

I am on cloud nine by the mere thought of nurturing the younger generation in order to become a useful part of the social body.


I am on cloud nine byat the mere thought of nurturing the younger generation in order to become a useful part of the social bodmembers of society.

In my opinion, she wishes someone trustworthy helped her unravel the discombobulating cacophony of questions in her head, giving her a silent moment of peace.


In my opinion, she wishes someone trustworthy could helped her unravel the discombobulating cacophony of questions in her head, giving her a silent moment of peacetranquility.

Should either be "could help her" or "had helped her."

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