Boss monkey

nambatsuyoshi

July 31, 2021

I read an interesting article in the newspaper this morning. It said as follows: A boss monkey in Takasakiyama changed recently. There is a mountain called Takasakiyama in Oita. A troop of monkeys lives there. This time, a female monkey became boss for the first time. Are females becoming stronger in both human and monkey societies?

今朝、面白い新聞記事を読みました。それによると高崎山のボス猿が変わったらしいです。大分に高崎山という山があります。そこに猿の群れが住んでいます。今回、初めてメス猿がボスになったそうです。人間の社会も猿の社会も女性が強くなっているのでしょうか？

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mjm

Boss monkey

Usually, the first letter of title words has a capital letter, so: "Boss Monkey". However, what you have written would still be acceptable.

I read an interesting article in the newspaper this morning.

It said as follows: A boss monkey in Takasakiyama changed recently.

There is a mountain called Takasakiyama in Oita.

A troop of monkeys lives there.

~~This~~For the first time, a female monkey has becaome the boss ~~for the first tim~~there.

Are females becoming stronger in both human and monkey societies?

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This is good.

I was not sure where the quote from the newspaper article ended. Perhaps the end was before the new sentence "There is a mountain ..." ? The flow of the passage could be improved a little. Here is a suggestion for you:

I read an interesting article in the newspaper this morning. It said, "A boss monkey in Takasakiyama changed recently."
There is a mountain called Takasakiyama in Oita, where a troop of monkeys lives. For the first time, a female monkey has become the boss there. I wonder whether females are becoming stronger in both human and monkey societies?

I hope the above helps. Let me know if you would like more help.
mjm

nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 1, 2021

Thank you!

Boss monkey

Usually, the first letter of title words has a capital letter, so: "Boss Monkey". However, what you have written would still be acceptable.

I read an interesting article in the newspaper this morning.