Jan. 19, 2025
Bored
Hello
I'm new person in here
I don't know what I'm suppose to write
just rambling about anything
why my title bored? because today is weekend
and I'm bored
I want to go somewhere but i don't know where to go
and I'm too tired to go out
How about watching some movies or drama series at home?
hmmm I'm not interested with that but I like Anime
BUT the anime that I like right know is still ongoing and the new episode only update once every week
I want to stock all the episode but I'm too curious what will happen next
How about watching the previous anime that already complete?
I have already watched them and I'm a picky person so there's not many anime that I like
Then, how about just exercise at home?
haha the answer is.....
later
okay that's it about today
see you next time
Halo
Aku orang baru disini
Aku tidak tahu harus menulis apa
Hanya bertele-tele tentang apa saja
Kenapa judulku bosan? karena hari ini akhir pekan
dan aku bosan
Aku ingin pergi suatu tempat tapi aku tidak tahu harus kemana
dan aku terlalu capek untuk pergi keluar
Bagaimana kalau menonton film atau drama series di rumah?
hmmm aku tidak tertarik dengan itu tapi aku suka Anime
TAPI anime yang aku suka sekarang masih berlajut dan episode barunya hanya muncul satu kali seminggu
Aku ingin mengumpulkan semua episode tapi aku orangnya penasaran sama kelanjutannya
Bagaimana kalau menonton anime sebelumnya yang sudah tamat?
Aku sudah menonton semua animenya dan aku orangnya pilih-pilih jadi tidak banyak anime yang aku suka
Kalau begitu, bagaimana kalau olahraga saja dirumah?
haha jawabannya....
nanti
Ok itu saja hari ini
Sampai ketemu lagi
Bored
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Why my title b"Bored"?
bBecause today is the weekend
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I want to go somewhere, but iI don't know where to go
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How about watching some movies or a drama series at home?
hHmmm. I'm not interested within that but I like Anime
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BUT the anime that I like right know is still ongoing and the new episode only updates once everya week.
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I want to stockave up all the episodes but I'm too curious about what will happen next
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How about watching thea previous anime that is already complete?
I have already watched them and I'm a picky person, so there's not many anime that I like
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Well then, how about just exerciseing at home?
hHaha the answer is.....
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later
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okay t
Okay. That's it about it today
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See you next time.
Feedback
Good work.
Bored
Hello
¶
I'm a new person in here
.¶
I don't know what I'm supposed to write
¶, so I'm just rambling about anything
¶.¶
why
Why is my title "bored"?
There are few minor grammatical errors, but I mostly adapted the punctuation to make clearer sentences.
bBecause today is a weekend
¶ and I'm bored
.¶
I want to go somewhere but iI don't know where to go
¶, and I'm too tired to go out
.¶
How about watching some movies or a drama series at home?
Well done, with good use of expressions. Again, I mostly just changed the punctuation.
hHmmm I'm not interested within that (or "in doing that"), but I like Anime
.¶
BUT the anime that I like right know is still ongoing and the new episodes only updatecome out once everya week
.¶
I want to stock all the episodes but I'm too curious to find what will happen next
.¶
How about watching the previous anime that is already complete?
I have already watched them and I'm a picky person so there's not many anime that I like
.¶
Then, how about just exercise at home?
haha the answer is.....
¶later
¶.¶
o
Okay that's it about today
¶(Or "That's it for today")¶
s
See you next time.
Feedback
Your English is very good as you use several good expressions and make few mistakes. It would be easier to correct if the sentences were clearer.
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Hello I'm new person in here I don't know what I'm suppose to write just rambling about anything why my title bored? Hello There are few minor grammatical errors, but I mostly adapted the punctuation to make clearer sentences. Hello |
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because today is weekend and I'm bored I want to go somewhere but i don't know where to go and I'm too tired to go out How about watching some movies or drama series at home?
Well done, with good use of expressions. Again, I mostly just changed the punctuation.
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hmmm I'm not interested with that but I like Anime BUT the anime that I like right know is still ongoing and the new episode only update once every week I want to stock all the episode but I'm too curious what will happen next How about watching the previous anime that already complete?
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I have already watched them and I'm a picky person so there's not many anime that I like Then, how about just exercise at home? I have already watched them and I'm a picky person so there's not many anime that I like I have already watched them and I'm a picky person, so there's not many anime that I like |
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haha the answer is..... later okay that's it about today see you next time haha the answer is.....
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