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heyyawn

May 2, 2021

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Book: Peak

These days I am very inefficient in my studies. Today I found a book titled "Peak: Secrets from the New Science of Expertise" on my desktop. I have read the book before, but I decided to read it again. After reading it, I reailzed I have been living what I learn from this book. For example, learning from the top people in the field. Find the right teacher at the different stages. Combine knowledge with practice.
At this time, I found "3F" theory, focus, feedback and fix it. I was doing better in the latter two areas, but focus was something I had neglected. I could read for long periods of time but sometimes I wasn't focused. It was important for me to take breaks during my studies.

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Book: Peak

These days I am very inefficient in my studies.

Today I found a book titled "Peak: Secrets from the New Science of Expertise" on my desktop.

Instead of "a book", you can also say "an e-book" since it is an electronic book on your desktop.

I have read the book before, but I decided to read it again.

After reading it, I reailized that I have been livpracticing what I have learnt from this book (all this while).¶

You can add "all this while" at the end of the sentence to emphasize the period of time
.

For example, learning from the top people in the field.

Find the right teacher at the different stages.

"different stages" is plural so there is no need for "the" because "the" usually refers to specific one

Combine knowledge with practice.

At tThis time, I foundlearnt about "3F" theory, which refers to focus, feedback and fix it.

I could read for long periods of time but sometimes I wasn't focused.

It wais important for me to take breaks during my studies.

Present tense because it is relevant now, that you take breaks during your studies. It is something that you did not practice before this.

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heyyawn

May 5, 2021

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Thanks :)

Book: Peak


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These days I am very inefficient in my studies.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I found a book titled "Peak: Secrets from the New Science of Expertise" on my desktop.


Today I found a book titled "Peak: Secrets from the New Science of Expertise" on my desktop.

Instead of "a book", you can also say "an e-book" since it is an electronic book on your desktop.

I have read the book before, but I decided to read it again.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After reading it, I reailzed I have been living what I learn from this book.


After reading it, I reailized that I have been livpracticing what I have learnt from this book (all this while).¶

You can add "all this while" at the end of the sentence to emphasize the period of time
.

For example, learning from the top people in the field.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Find the right teacher at the different stages.


Find the right teacher at the different stages.

"different stages" is plural so there is no need for "the" because "the" usually refers to specific one

Combine knowledge with practice.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At this time, I found "3F" theory, focus, feedback and fix it.


At tThis time, I foundlearnt about "3F" theory, which refers to focus, feedback and fix it.

I was doing better in the latter two areas, but focus was something I had neglected.


I could read for long periods of time but sometimes I wasn't focused.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was important for me to take breaks during my studies.


It wais important for me to take breaks during my studies.

Present tense because it is relevant now, that you take breaks during your studies. It is something that you did not practice before this.

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