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heatedcanine

Oct. 6, 2024

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Beetlejuice Beetlejuice

I just went to the theater to watch the movie "Beetlejuice Beetlejuice."
It was a fantastic movie and I enjoyed watching it.
I went there alone.
At first, there was only one attendance in that theater, then a couple came in.
After about ten minutes from the beginning of the movie, a group of four people entered the theater. Therefore, there were seven people in the end.

When I want to focus on watching the movie, I make it a point to go to the theater alone.
I need to focus on watching the sciene, listening their talks, and reading the subtitles.

I love that movie.
I love Tim Barton's films.
I love Michel Keaton's acting.
I love Jenna Ortega. After finishing watching the movie, I finally realized that she was Wednsday Adams, in the Netflix drama, "Wednsday."
The movie looks an hommage of Adams Family.
The actors and actresses seems somehow familiar to me.
After Googling them, I found that the mother in "Home Alone" reappeared in that film.
"Terma & Luise"'s Terma (or Luise) was in it too.

There were so many interesting points in it, but I think it was very cool whom Jenna Ortega pretended to be in her Halloween costume.
I wonder if younger people know about her.


私は「ビートルジュース ビートルジュース」という映画を観るために映画館に行ってきました。素晴らしい映画で、とても面白かったです。一人で行ったのですが、最初は館内に私だけしかいなくて「貸し切り」状態でした。その後、カップルが一組入ってきて、映画が始まってから約10分後に、4人のグループが入ってきました。最終的には7人がその場にいました。

私は、映画に集中して観たいときは、一人で劇場に行くようにしています。映像をしっかり観て、セリフをよく聞き、字幕を読むことに集中する必要があるからです。

私はこの映画が大好きです。ティム・バートンの映画が大好きで、マイケル・キートンの演技も大好きです。
ジェナ・オルテガも大好きです。この映画を観終わった後に、彼女がNetflixドラマ「ウェンズデー」のウェンズデー・アダムス役だったことに気づきました。
この映画はアダムスファミリーへのオマージュのように感じました。俳優や女優たちも、なんとなく見覚えがあるように思いました。
グーグルで調べたところ、「ホーム・アローン」に出ていたお母さん役の女優がこの映画に再び出演していることがわかりました。
「テルマとルイーズ」のテルマ(かルイーズ)も出ていました。

他にもたくさん面白い点がありましたが、特に印象に残ったのは、ジェナ・オルテガがハロウィンの仮装で誰の真似をしていたかということです。
若い人たちは、誰のことなのかピンと来ないのではないかと思いました。

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Beetlejuice Beetlejuice

I just went to the theater to watch the movie "Beetlejuice Beetlejuice."

It was a fantastic movie and I enjoyed watching it.

I went there alone.

At first, there was only one person in attendance in that theater, then a couple came in.

After about ten minutes from the beginningafter the start of the movie, a group of four people entered the theater.

Therefore, there were seven people in the end.

When I want to focus on watching the movie, I make it a point to go to the theater alone.

I need to focus on watching the sciene, listening their talkso the dialogue, and reading the subtitles.

I loved that movie.

I love Tim Baurton's films.

I love Michel Keaton's acting.

I love Jenna Ortega.

After finishing watching the movie, I finally realized that she was Wednesday Addams, in the Netflix drama, "Wednesday."

The movie looks like an hommage ofto the Addams Family.

The actors and actresses seemsed somehow familiar to me.

After Googling them, I found that the mother in "Home Alone" realso appeared in that film.

"Terma & Luise"'s" Terma (or Luise) was in it too.

There were so many interesting points in it, but I think it was very cool whomen Jenna Ortega pretended to be in her Halloween costume.

I wonder if younger people know about her.

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heatedcanine

Oct. 10, 2024

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>but I think it was very cool when Jenna Ortega pretended to be in her Halloween costume.
but I think it was very good as whom Jenna Ortega dressed up in her Halloween costume.
It was a very old female scientist, who won the Novel Prize.

Thank you for your corrections and comment!

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shorter

Oct. 11, 2024

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No prob! Tho not sure what the above sentences were trying to get at...

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heatedcanine

Oct. 11, 2024

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Someone dresses up as Dracula in ther Halloween costume. They pretend to be Dracula.
Some guy dresses up as Batman in his Halloween custume. They pretend to be Batman.
Astrid (acted by Jenna Ortega) dressed up as Madame Curie in her Halloween costume.
"Madame Curie" seems very rare, unusual, and obsolete-from-a-certain-viewpoint, as the Haloween custume.
I think it's very unque and cool, and I think the director Tim Barton is cool as well.

This is what I wanted to say.
But I didn't want to reveal the name "Madame Curie", because I didn't want to be a spoiler.

Does it make more sense to you?

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shorter

Oct. 13, 2024

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Ohhh I see I see. I didn't realize you were describing who she dressed up as, so I didn't understand the part about the Nobel Prize. You can say something like "I think Astrid's choice in who to be for Halloween was very cool"

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I just went to the theater to watch the (2024) movie "Beetlejuice Beetlejuice."

NOTE: The quotations are optional.

It was a fantastic movie and I(I) enjoyed watching it.

推奨: 「I」という単語を削除してください (読者はあなたが自分の経験について書いていると推測できます)。
RECOMMENDATION: Delete the word "I." (Readers can infer you are writing about your own experience.)

At first, there was only one attendanceother person in that theater, then a couple came in.

After about ten minutes from the beginning ofafter the movie started, a group of four people entered the theater.

Therefore, there were seven people in the end.

When I wanting to focus on watching thea movie, I make it a point to go to the theater alone.

I need to focus on watching the sciene, listening their talkso dialog, and reading the subtitles.

次の 2 つの文を次のように 1 つの文に結合します。I loved that movie., as well as Tim Burton's others films.

I love Tim Barton's films.(SEE ABOVE)

次の 2 つの文を次のように 1 つの文に結合します。 I love Michel Keaton's acting. and love Jenna Ortega.

I love Jenna Ortega.(SEE ABOVE)

After finishing watching the movie, I finally realized that she was Wednsday Adams, in the Netflix drama, "Wednsday."

The movie looksseemed like an hommage ofto the Adams Family.

The actors and actresses seems somehow familiar to me.

After Googling them, I found that the mother in "Home Alone" reappeared in that film.

"Terma & Luise"'s Terma (or Luise) was in it too.[I could not understand this sentence.]

There were so many interesting points in it, but I think it was very cool whom Jenna Ortega pretended to be in herappeared in a Halloween costume.

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Glad you enjoyed the movie.

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heatedcanine

Oct. 10, 2024

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>"Terma & Luise"'s Terma (or Luise) was in it too.[I could not understand this sentence.]

The movie Thelma & Louise features two women as the main characters, Thelma and Louise. I can't remember which one, but one of the actresses also appeared in Beetlejuice.
The actress I’m referring to is Geena Davis, who played Thelma in Thelma & Louise and also appeared as Barbara Maitland in Beetlejuice.

Thank you for your corrections!

I just went to the theatermovies to watch the movie "Beetlejuice Beetlejuice."

At first, there was only one attendanceother person in thate theater, but then a couple came in.

Or, if the only person in the theatre was you, then
"At first, I was the only one in the theater, but then a couple came in."

After about ten minutes from the beginning of the movie, a group of four people entered the theater.

This is fine. More concisely,
"Ten minutes in, a group of four entered."
is also okay.

I need to focus on watching the scienes, listening to theirm talks, and reading the subtitles.

Or, "... listening to the dialogue, ..."

I love Tim Baurton's films.

I love Michael Keaton's acting.

After finishing watching the movie, I finally realized that she was Wednesday Adams, in the Netflix drama, "Wednsday."

Or,
"After finishing the movie, ..."

The movie looks like an hommage ofto the Addams Family.

The actors and actresses seems somehow familiar to me.

"Terhelma & Louise"'s Terhelma (or Louise) was in it too.

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I hadn't heard about Beetlejuice Beetlejuice before reading your post, but I'm interested now! I like Tim Burton, and much of the cast. Maybe I'll watch it as it gets closer to Halloween.

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heatedcanine

Oct. 6, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comments!
I hope you'll like it!

Beetlejuice Beetlejuice

I just went to the theatercinema to watch the movie "Beetlejuice Beetlejuice."

By itself, "theatre" is where you would watch a play or musical

For movies, you can say it like this:
"I went to the cinema to watch (the movie) Beetlejuice Beetlejuice"
"I went to the movies to watch Beetlejuice Beetlejuice"
"I went to the movie theatre to watch Beetlejuice Beetlejuice"

#1 is what I would consider most natural, at least in British English.

It was a fantastic movie and I enjoyed watching it.

I went there aloneby myself.

The word "alone" technically means to go with nobody, but it is most commonly used in a negative way to suggest that you didn't want to be by yourself.

"None of my friends wanted to spend time with me, so I went to the cinema alone"

Other examples to illustrate the point:-
"I am all alone in this scary forest!"
"I wish I had a girlfriend so I wasn't alone all the time"

At first, there was only one attendance in that theater,other person there, but then a couple came in.

After about ten minutes from the beginning of the movieafter the movie had started, a group of four people also entered the theatere.

Do you mean 10 minutes prior to the movie starting? Or, 10 minutes after it had started?

Therefore, there were seven people in the endotal.

Or:
"In the end, there were seven people"

When I want to focus on watching the movie, I make it a point to go to the theater alone.

I need to focus on watching the scienes, listening their talkso the dialogue, and reading the subtitles.

I loved thate movie.

I love Tim Baurton's films.

I love Michel Keaton's acting.

I love Jenna Ortega.

After finishing watching the movie, I finally realized that she wasplayed Wednesday Adams, in the Netflix drama, "Wednesday."

In this example, you don't need to have "finishing" -- we can simply say "after the movie".

You could maybe say:
"It was only after the movie that I realized she played Wednesday Adams in the Netflix drama "Wednesday".

The movie looks an hommage ofto the Adams Family.

The actors and actresses seemsed somehow familiar to me.

After Googling them, I found that one of the cast played the mother in "Home Alone" reappeared in that film.

"Terma & Luise"'s Terma (orThe actress who played Thelma from "Thelma & Louise)" was in it, too.

There were so many interesting points in itarts, but I think it was very cool whomen Jenna Ortega pretended to be in her Halloween costume.

"Interesting point" would be used about a discussion or a debate, not typically about a movie (unless the movie was particularly thought-provoking).

I don't understand the use of "pretended" here..?

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Great post!

I find it amusing that something like Beetlejuice (from the 1980s) has been revived. It was always considered a trashy movie when I was growing up. One of my friends made the point that there is very little originality coming from Hollywood these days, and wondered what old thing they're going to "reimagine" or "remaster" next.

Yes, I think Jenna Ortega is now pretty famous with younger people because of how successful "Wednesday" is/was. I didn't know about her before then.

Beetlejuice Beetlejuice


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I just went to the theater to watch the movie "Beetlejuice Beetlejuice."


I just went to the theatercinema to watch the movie "Beetlejuice Beetlejuice."

By itself, "theatre" is where you would watch a play or musical For movies, you can say it like this: "I went to the cinema to watch (the movie) Beetlejuice Beetlejuice" "I went to the movies to watch Beetlejuice Beetlejuice" "I went to the movie theatre to watch Beetlejuice Beetlejuice" #1 is what I would consider most natural, at least in British English.

I just went to the theatermovies to watch the movie "Beetlejuice Beetlejuice."

I just went to the theater to watch the (2024) movie "Beetlejuice Beetlejuice."

NOTE: The quotations are optional.

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It was a fantastic movie and I enjoyed watching it.


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It was a fantastic movie and I(I) enjoyed watching it.

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I went there alone.


I went there aloneby myself.

The word "alone" technically means to go with nobody, but it is most commonly used in a negative way to suggest that you didn't want to be by yourself. "None of my friends wanted to spend time with me, so I went to the cinema alone" Other examples to illustrate the point:- "I am all alone in this scary forest!" "I wish I had a girlfriend so I wasn't alone all the time"

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At first, there was only one attendance in that theater, then a couple came in.


At first, there was only one attendance in that theater,other person there, but then a couple came in.

At first, there was only one attendanceother person in thate theater, but then a couple came in.

Or, if the only person in the theatre was you, then "At first, I was the only one in the theater, but then a couple came in."

At first, there was only one attendanceother person in that theater, then a couple came in.

At first, there was only one person in attendance in that theater, then a couple came in.

After about ten minutes from the beginning of the movie, a group of four people entered the theater.


After about ten minutes from the beginning of the movieafter the movie had started, a group of four people also entered the theatere.

Do you mean 10 minutes prior to the movie starting? Or, 10 minutes after it had started?

After about ten minutes from the beginning of the movie, a group of four people entered the theater.

This is fine. More concisely, "Ten minutes in, a group of four entered." is also okay.

After about ten minutes from the beginning ofafter the movie started, a group of four people entered the theater.

After about ten minutes from the beginningafter the start of the movie, a group of four people entered the theater.

Therefore, there were seven people in the end.


Therefore, there were seven people in the endotal.

Or: "In the end, there were seven people"

Therefore, there were seven people in the end.

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When I want to focus on watching the movie, I make it a point to go to the theater alone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I wanting to focus on watching thea movie, I make it a point to go to the theater alone.

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I need to focus on watching the sciene, listening their talks, and reading the subtitles.


I need to focus on watching the scienes, listening their talkso the dialogue, and reading the subtitles.

I need to focus on watching the scienes, listening to theirm talks, and reading the subtitles.

Or, "... listening to the dialogue, ..."

I need to focus on watching the sciene, listening their talkso dialog, and reading the subtitles.

I need to focus on watching the sciene, listening their talkso the dialogue, and reading the subtitles.

I love that movie.


I loved thate movie.

次の 2 つの文を次のように 1 つの文に結合します。I loved that movie., as well as Tim Burton's others films.

I loved that movie.

I love Tim Barton's films.


I love Tim Baurton's films.

I love Tim Baurton's films.

I love Tim Barton's films.(SEE ABOVE)

I love Tim Baurton's films.

I love Michel Keaton's acting.


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I love Michael Keaton's acting.

次の 2 つの文を次のように 1 つの文に結合します。 I love Michel Keaton's acting. and love Jenna Ortega.

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I love Jenna Ortega.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love Jenna Ortega.(SEE ABOVE)

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After finishing watching the movie, I finally realized that she was Wednsday Adams, in the Netflix drama, "Wednsday."


After finishing watching the movie, I finally realized that she wasplayed Wednesday Adams, in the Netflix drama, "Wednesday."

In this example, you don't need to have "finishing" -- we can simply say "after the movie". You could maybe say: "It was only after the movie that I realized she played Wednesday Adams in the Netflix drama "Wednesday".

After finishing watching the movie, I finally realized that she was Wednesday Adams, in the Netflix drama, "Wednsday."

Or, "After finishing the movie, ..."

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After finishing watching the movie, I finally realized that she was Wednesday Addams, in the Netflix drama, "Wednesday."

The movie looks an hommage of Adams Family.


The movie looks an hommage ofto the Adams Family.

The movie looks like an hommage ofto the Addams Family.

The movie looksseemed like an hommage ofto the Adams Family.

The movie looks like an hommage ofto the Addams Family.

The actors and actresses seems somehow familiar to me.


The actors and actresses seemsed somehow familiar to me.

The actors and actresses seems somehow familiar to me.

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The actors and actresses seemsed somehow familiar to me.

"Terma & Luise"'s Terma (or Luise) was in it too.


"Terma & Luise"'s Terma (orThe actress who played Thelma from "Thelma & Louise)" was in it, too.

"Terhelma & Louise"'s Terhelma (or Louise) was in it too.

"Terma & Luise"'s Terma (or Luise) was in it too.[I could not understand this sentence.]

"Terma & Luise"'s" Terma (or Luise) was in it too.

After Googling them, I found that the mother in "Home Alone" reappeared in that film.


After Googling them, I found that one of the cast played the mother in "Home Alone" reappeared in that film.

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After Googling them, I found that the mother in "Home Alone" realso appeared in that film.

There were so many interesting points in it, but I think it was very cool whom Jenna Ortega pretended to be in her Halloween costume.


There were so many interesting points in itarts, but I think it was very cool whomen Jenna Ortega pretended to be in her Halloween costume.

"Interesting point" would be used about a discussion or a debate, not typically about a movie (unless the movie was particularly thought-provoking). I don't understand the use of "pretended" here..?

There were so many interesting points in it, but I think it was very cool whom Jenna Ortega pretended to be in herappeared in a Halloween costume.

There were so many interesting points in it, but I think it was very cool whomen Jenna Ortega pretended to be in her Halloween costume.

I wonder if younger people know about her.


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