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pancelot

May 8, 2021

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Bad day yesterday.

Yesterday was a bad day. I had to make a presentation for the University, well It was a mess. I slept 4 hours in two days in order to prepare it, but it wasn't enough. But for some reason I don't feel sad or dissapointed. I feel that I have to work harder to know the theory and the practice requeried in the real life. Because at the univerity we only learn from books, and for that reason I didn't feel prepared to face the real world. Now I discovered the key to be more prepared for my futures jobs.

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I had to make a presentation for the University, class—well I, it was a mess.

I slept 4four hours in two days in order to prepare for it, but it wasn't enough.

But for some reason, I don't feel sad or dissappointed.

I feel that I have to work harder to know the theory and the practice requerired in the real life.

Because aAt the university we only learn from books, and for that reason I didn't feel prepared to face the real world.

Now I have discovered the key to being more prepared for my futures jobs.

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Great job!

Yesterday was a bad day.

I had to make a presentation for the University, well Imy class, but it was a mess.

"For the university" sounds like you presented to the entire school. If you are only making a presentation for a class, be specific!

I slept 4 hours in two days in order to prepare it, but it wasn't enough.

But for some reason I don't feel sad or dissapointed.

I feel thatas though I have to work harder to know the theory and the practice requeried in the real lifeunderstand the real world.

"to know the theory and practice the required" is unclear. You want to work harder to understand how the real world works, so we'll say this instead!

Because at the university we only learn from books, and for that reason I didn't feel prepared to face the real worldreality.

Making it flow a little better and adding casual context.

Now I discovered the key to be more prepared for my futures jobs.

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Great journal! A few minor errors, but I understood what you wanted to say!

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pancelot

May 8, 2021

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Thanks for your corrections and your words :D

Bad day yesterday.


Yesterday was a bad day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had to make a presentation for the University, well It was a mess.


I had to make a presentation for the University, well Imy class, but it was a mess.

"For the university" sounds like you presented to the entire school. If you are only making a presentation for a class, be specific!

I had to make a presentation for the University, class—well I, it was a mess.

I slept 4 hours in two days in order to prepare it, but it wasn't enough.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I slept 4four hours in two days in order to prepare for it, but it wasn't enough.

But for some reason I don't feel sad or dissapointed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But for some reason, I don't feel sad or dissappointed.

I feel that I have to work harder to know the theory and the practice requeried in the real life.


I feel thatas though I have to work harder to know the theory and the practice requeried in the real lifeunderstand the real world.

"to know the theory and practice the required" is unclear. You want to work harder to understand how the real world works, so we'll say this instead!

I feel that I have to work harder to know the theory and the practice requerired in the real life.

Because at the univerity we only learn from books, and for that reason I didn't feel prepared to face the real world.


Because at the university we only learn from books, and for that reason I didn't feel prepared to face the real worldreality.

Making it flow a little better and adding casual context.

Because aAt the university we only learn from books, and for that reason I didn't feel prepared to face the real world.

Now I discovered the key to be more prepared for my futures jobs.


Now I discovered the key to be more prepared for my futures jobs.

Now I have discovered the key to being more prepared for my futures jobs.

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