May 7, 2026
Day 2 - improved with collocations and phrasal verbs.
The day before yesterday I stayed at home all the day, then, a friend of mine came at my house and we studied something. After that he begged me to go out with our friends, because I don't like them to be honest. At the end, Instead, I agreed to hang out with them in a public space and to be honest I really enjoyed this time because, like, I became really happy, so, that's It.
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The day before yesterday I stayed at home all the day, then, a friend of mine came ato my house and we studied something.
The day before yesterday I stayed at home all the day, then, a friend of mine came to my house and we studied something.
After that, he begged me to go out with our friends, becaussince I don't like them to be honest.
After that, he begged me to go out with our friends, since I don't like them to be honest.
"Since" feels like a better fit in this sentence.
AtIn the end, Instead, I agreed to hang out with them in a public space and, to be honest, I really enjoyed it this time because, like, I became really happy, so, that's It.
In the end, I agreed to hang out with them in a public space and, to be honest, I really enjoyed it this time because, like, I became really happy, so, that's It.
Day 2 - improved with collocations and phrasal verbs.
The day before yesterday I stayed at home all the day, then, a friend of mine came ato my house and we studied something.
The day before yesterday I stayed at home all day, then, a friend of mine came to my house and we studied something.
(1) "All day" is pretty much a fixed expression. Alternatively: "The day before yesterday I stayed at home the entire day".
(2) The collocation is "come to (a place)". "Come at" also exists, but is used in a different context.
After that he begged me to go out with our friends, because I don't like them to be honest.
AtIn the end, I instead, I agreed to hang out with them in a public space and to be honest I really enjoyed this time because, like, I became really happy, so, that's Iit.
In the end, I instead agreed to hang out with them in a public space and to be honest I really enjoyed this time because, like, I became really happy, so, that's it.
(1) The expression is "in the end".
(2) The placement of the "instead" is a little unnatural I feel.
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Day 2 - improved with collocations and phrasal verbs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The day before yesterday I stayed at home all the day, then, a friend of mine came at my house and we studied something.
The day before yesterday I stayed at home all (1) "All day" is pretty much a fixed expression. Alternatively: "The day before yesterday I stayed at home the entire day". (2) The collocation is "come to (a place)". "Come at" also exists, but is used in a different context.
The day before yesterday I stayed at home all the day, then, a friend of mine came |
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After that he begged me to go out with our friends, because I don't like them to be honest. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
After that, he begged me to go out with our friends, "Since" feels like a better fit in this sentence. |
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At the end, Instead, I agreed to hang out with them in a public space and to be honest I really enjoyed this time because, like, I became really happy, so, that's It.
(1) The expression is "in the end". (2) The placement of the "instead" is a little unnatural I feel.
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