Sept. 22, 2025
Art exhibition visit in last week
The exhibition I visited is called “Language Africana that makes Brazil” I thought very interesting because more word that is used every day and not and we don’t know where it comes from. The day I went had more black people, I realized the importance of representation is important in art, for the black people feel like they belong
A exposição que fui se chama “Línguas africanas que fazem o Brasil”, achei muito interessante porque tem muitas palavras que é usado no dia a dia e não sabemos de onde vem, no dia que fui tinhas muitas pessoas pretas, só demonstra como a representação negra é importante na arte, para as pessoas se sentirem pertencentes e representadas
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Even better: Last Week's Art Exhibition
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The exhibition title follows title capitalizaton rules.
I don't understand your second sentence, but I edited it to mean that the exhibition illustrated that there are many common words in your language where the word origins are not clear. However, I still didn't understand the "and not" part.
TOn the day I went had more, there were a lot of black people, and I realized the importance of representation is important in art, f. For the black people to feel like they belong.
I would use "a lot" instead of "more," because using "more" begs the question: more than what?
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The exhibition I visited is called “Language Africana that makes Brazil” I thought very interesting because more word that is used every day and not and we don’t know where it comes from. The exhibition I visited The exhibition title follows title capitalizaton rules. I don't understand your second sentence, but I edited it to mean that the exhibition illustrated that there are many common words in your language where the word origins are not clear. However, I still didn't understand the "and not" part. |
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The day I went had more black people, I realized the importance of representation is important in art, for the black people feel like they belong
I would use "a lot" instead of "more," because using "more" begs the question: more than what? |
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