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orea5

April 28, 2021

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As we've decided to arrange a farewell and thank you meeting for our teacher, I'd like to share with you some of my ideas.
In case of fine weather for ducks our group might gather at my place and use my PC to communicate with the teacher. If it's hot out there we could all have a picnic in the park.
Kelly and Jimmy have already agreed to puton a guitar gig. Im going to order different flavour pizzas with traditional toppings and dependently on the weather they will be delivered to either the teacher's and my places or to the park.
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As we've decided to arrange a farewell and thank you meeting for our teacher, I'd like to share with you some of my ideas.

In case of finepoor weather for ducks, our group might gather at my place and use my PC to communicate with the teacher.

I understand what you meant, but the ducks thing sounds quite awkward.

If it's hot out there, we could all have a picnic in the park.

Kelly and Jimmy have already agreed to puton alay some songs on the guitar gig.

A "gig" usually refers to a paid show or job of some sort.

I'm going to order different flavourtypes of pizzas with traditional toppings, and dependentlying on the weather they will be delivered to either to the teacher's place and my places, or to the park.

Please confirm your participation by e-mail or Teams chat box.

If you have access to neither of those, just give me a call.

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orea5

April 28, 2021

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Thank you a lot🙂. Could you just tell me why types of pizzas is incorrect?

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As we've decided to arrange a farewell and thank you meeting for our teacher, I'd like to share with you some of my ideas.


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In case of fine weather for ducks our group might gather at my place and use my PC to communicate with the teacher.


In case of finepoor weather for ducks, our group might gather at my place and use my PC to communicate with the teacher.

I understand what you meant, but the ducks thing sounds quite awkward.

If it's hot out there we could all have a picnic in the park.


If it's hot out there, we could all have a picnic in the park.

Kelly and Jimmy have already agreed to puton a guitar gig.


Kelly and Jimmy have already agreed to puton alay some songs on the guitar gig.

A "gig" usually refers to a paid show or job of some sort.

Im going to order different flavour pizzas with traditional toppings and dependently on the weather they will be delivered to either the teacher's and my places or to the park.


I'm going to order different flavourtypes of pizzas with traditional toppings, and dependentlying on the weather they will be delivered to either to the teacher's place and my places, or to the park.

Please confirm your participation by e-mail or Teams chat box.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you have access to neither of those, just give me a call.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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