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1. The Supreme Court seems split in a lot of different directions today. The question before it, whether a 1968 federal that punishes marijuana users for owning a gun violates the Second Amendment.
The marijuana is legan in 40 states, but at the same time it´s illegal under federal law and is classified as a Schedule drug- among the most dangerous. So, President Trump is trying is reclassify the drug as less dangerous. But his Justice Department was seeking to uphold a law that makes it a crime punishable by up to 15 years in prison for a marihuana user to own a gun. This creates confusions about whether is legal or illegal.

2. How prison staffing shortages are driven away mental health staff.
Alix McLearen considered that Psychologists in the bureau of the prisons do so many things. Thay are reentry professionals. So not only are doing what you would traditionally think of a psychologist doing a clinical work, but they´re working to help people plan for their reentry.
Some things don´t just impact them, but impact the entire community of the facility, the staff and the people who are incarcerated there. The fact of don´t prioritize the hiring of psychologists or the fact being considered correctional workers first, which means that they do serve law enforcement functions. But with a lower salary than other government agencies or the private sector. The system creates a crisis and instability because what the psychologist are doing are transforming any risk that arrives into some kind of actionable steps toward safety, instated of receiving the support they requiere to refrain from self-harm.

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My two readings

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The Supreme Court seems split in a lot of different directions today.

Alternatively: "The Supreme Court seems split on a lot of things lately."

The question before it,which came to them was whether a 1968 federal law that punishes marijuana users for owning a gun violates the Second Amendment.

The mMarijuana is leganl in 40 states, but at the same time it´s illegal under federal law and is classified as a Schedule I drug - among the most dangerous.

When talking about things in general, we'll usually use a plural form. Like, "Horses like to eat apples". However, "marijuana" is similar to "deer" or "dirt" in that it is either singular or plural based on context.

Marijuana is federally recognized in the United States as a Schedule I drug. Note that this number is in roman numeral form: I, II, III, IV, and so on.

So, President Trump is trying isto reclassify the drug as less dangerous.

But his Justice Department was seeking to uphold a law that makes it a crime punishable by up to 15 years in prison for a marihjuana user to own a gun.

This creates confusions about whether it is legal or illegal.

2.

How prison staffing shortages are drivening away mental health staff.

Alix McLearen considered that Psychologists in the bureau of thetalked about how psychologists working in prisons do so many things.

Thaey are re-entry professionals.

I'm pretty sure that, whenever there's a "re-" on a word starting with "e", we might use a hyphen "-" to make it easier to read.

So not only are they doing what you would traditionally think of a psychologist doing a, like with clinical work, but they´'re also working to help people plan for their re-entry into society.

Some things don´t just impact them, but impactalso the entire community ofwithin the facility, the staff and the people who are incarcerated there.

The fact ofis that people don´t prioritize the hiring of psychologists or the fact being considered, and when they do, they only consider them to be correctional workers first, which means that they donly serve law enforcement functions.

Unfortunately, I'm a bit confused by "or the fact being considered correctional workers first". Feel free to ignore my corrections after that part if I've misunderstood it.

But with a lower salary than other government agencies or the private sector.

The system creates a crisis and instability because what the psychologists are doing areis transforming any risk that arrives into some kindrt of actionable steps toward safety, instatead of recejust giving the support theyinmates requiere to refrain from self-harm.

Hopefully I didn't misunderstand this sentence.

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Hope this helps! Keep up the good work!

My two readings

1.

The Supreme Court seems split in a lot of different directions today.

The question before it, is whether or not a 1968 federal law that punishes marijuana users for owning a gun violates the Second Amendment.

The mMarijuana is leganl in 40 states, but at the same time it´s illegal under federal law and is classified as a Schedule drug- among the most dangerous.

So, President Trump is trying is reclassify the drug as less dangerous.

But his Justice Department was seeking to uphold a law that makes it a crime punishable by up to 15 years in prison for a marihjuana user to own a gun.

This creates confusions about whether is legal or illegal.

How prison staffing shortages are drivening away mental health staff.

Alix McLearen considered that Ppsychologists in the bBureau of the pPrisons do so many things.

Thaey are re-entry professionals.

So not only are they doing what you would traditionally think of a psychologist doing, such as clinical work, but they´re working to help people plan for their re-entry.

Some things don´t just impact only them, but impact the entire community ofat the facility, the staff and the people who are incarcerated there.

Instead of “the people who are incarcerated there” you can say “the inmates”

The fact ofthat they don´t prioritize the hiring of psychologists orand the fact beingthat they are considered correctional workers first, which means that they do serve law enforcement functions.,

Bbut with a lower salary than other government agencies or the private sector.

This should be all one sentence

The system creates a crisis and instability because what the psychologists are doing areis transforming any risk that arrives into some kind of actionable steps toward safety, instatead of receiving the support they requiere to refrain from self-harmavoid injury.

Feedback

On the first point, the US is strange in that federal and state laws often contradict each other, and nobody has read the Constitution. In theory Controlled Drugs and Substances is a federal jurisdiction but then there are legal loopholes so states have a lot of power.

The second point was a little bit difficult to understand and somebody else will probably do a better job correcting

My two reading


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My two readings

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The Supreme Court seems split in a lot of different directions today.


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The Supreme Court seems split in a lot of different directions today.

Alternatively: "The Supreme Court seems split on a lot of things lately."

The question before it, whether a 1968 federal that punishes marijuana users for owning a gun violates the Second Amendment.


The question before it, is whether or not a 1968 federal law that punishes marijuana users for owning a gun violates the Second Amendment.

The question before it,which came to them was whether a 1968 federal law that punishes marijuana users for owning a gun violates the Second Amendment.

The marijuana is legan in 40 states, but at the same time it´s illegal under federal law and is classified as a Schedule drug- among the most dangerous.


The mMarijuana is leganl in 40 states, but at the same time it´s illegal under federal law and is classified as a Schedule drug- among the most dangerous.

The mMarijuana is leganl in 40 states, but at the same time it´s illegal under federal law and is classified as a Schedule I drug - among the most dangerous.

When talking about things in general, we'll usually use a plural form. Like, "Horses like to eat apples". However, "marijuana" is similar to "deer" or "dirt" in that it is either singular or plural based on context. Marijuana is federally recognized in the United States as a Schedule I drug. Note that this number is in roman numeral form: I, II, III, IV, and so on.

So, President Trump is trying is reclassify the drug as less dangerous.


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So, President Trump is trying isto reclassify the drug as less dangerous.

But his Justice Department was seeking to uphold a law that makes it a crime punishable by up to 15 years in prison for a marihuana user to own a gun.


But his Justice Department was seeking to uphold a law that makes it a crime punishable by up to 15 years in prison for a marihjuana user to own a gun.

But his Justice Department was seeking to uphold a law that makes it a crime punishable by up to 15 years in prison for a marihjuana user to own a gun.

This creates confusions about whether is legal or illegal.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This creates confusions about whether it is legal or illegal.

2.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

How prison staffing shortages are driven away mental health staff.


How prison staffing shortages are drivening away mental health staff.

How prison staffing shortages are drivening away mental health staff.

Alix McLearen considered that Psychologists in the bureau of the prisons do so many things.


Alix McLearen considered that Ppsychologists in the bBureau of the pPrisons do so many things.

Alix McLearen considered that Psychologists in the bureau of thetalked about how psychologists working in prisons do so many things.

Thay are reentry professionals.


Thaey are re-entry professionals.

Thaey are re-entry professionals.

I'm pretty sure that, whenever there's a "re-" on a word starting with "e", we might use a hyphen "-" to make it easier to read.

So not only are doing what you would traditionally think of a psychologist doing a clinical work, but they´re working to help people plan for their reentry.


So not only are they doing what you would traditionally think of a psychologist doing, such as clinical work, but they´re working to help people plan for their re-entry.

So not only are they doing what you would traditionally think of a psychologist doing a, like with clinical work, but they´'re also working to help people plan for their re-entry into society.

Some things don´t just impact them, but impact the entire community of the facility, the staff and the people who are incarcerated there.


Some things don´t just impact only them, but impact the entire community ofat the facility, the staff and the people who are incarcerated there.

Instead of “the people who are incarcerated there” you can say “the inmates”

Some things don´t just impact them, but impactalso the entire community ofwithin the facility, the staff and the people who are incarcerated there.

The fact of don´t prioritize the hiring of psychologists or the fact being considered correctional workers first, which means that they do serve law enforcement functions.


The fact ofthat they don´t prioritize the hiring of psychologists orand the fact beingthat they are considered correctional workers first, which means that they do serve law enforcement functions.,

The fact ofis that people don´t prioritize the hiring of psychologists or the fact being considered, and when they do, they only consider them to be correctional workers first, which means that they donly serve law enforcement functions.

Unfortunately, I'm a bit confused by "or the fact being considered correctional workers first". Feel free to ignore my corrections after that part if I've misunderstood it.

But with a lower salary than other government agencies or the private sector.


Bbut with a lower salary than other government agencies or the private sector.

This should be all one sentence

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The system creates a crisis and instability because what the psychologist are doing are transforming any risk that arrives into some kind of actionable steps toward safety, instated of receiving the support they requiere to refrain from self-harm.


The system creates a crisis and instability because what the psychologists are doing areis transforming any risk that arrives into some kind of actionable steps toward safety, instatead of receiving the support they requiere to refrain from self-harmavoid injury.

The system creates a crisis and instability because what the psychologists are doing areis transforming any risk that arrives into some kindrt of actionable steps toward safety, instatead of recejust giving the support theyinmates requiere to refrain from self-harm.

Hopefully I didn't misunderstand this sentence.

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