Jan. 2, 2026
Are you good at networking?
I’m really not good at networking. I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’t suit myself. Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relations with other people on there. I have no idea how I make my new friends.
I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’it doesn't suit myselfe.
Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relations with other people on therhaven't connected with anyone.
I have no idea how Ito make my new friends.
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Jan. 4, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I feel like I wrote better overall this time.
Are you good at networking?
I’m really not good at networking.
I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’t suit myselfe.
Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relaconnections with the other people on there.
I have no idea how I make my new friends.
Jan. 4, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I feel like I wrote better overall this time.
Are you good at networking?
I’m really not goobad at networking.
"Not good" is still OK!
I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’t suit myselfe.
"I tried to be an outgoing person" is still OK, but not saying "person" when using an adjective like this to describe the subject is more natural. (Example: "Tamaki is nice.")
Everything that comes after "but" should be treated like a new sentence. Since "I" isn't already the subject in that sentence, "me" should be used instead.
Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relaany connections with other people on there.
"any relations" is OK too! This just sounds more natural.
I have no idea how Ito make my new friends.
Since you do not have new friends yet, you do not use "my".
"to" is used when talking about an action or verb. (Example: "I'm going to eat this.")
"to" can also be used to talk about a location (Example: "I'm going to the store.")
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俺も上手じゃない. 外向的な振りは難しい.
(I'm bad at it too. Trying to act outgoing is hard.)
ローラースケートをしかった. いることは外で助けた.
(I used to roller skate. Being outside helped.)
You might want to say "make friends"/"making friends" instead of "networking".
"Networking" is used to talk about connections that could help with your job or career.
Great work!
Jan. 2, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You teach me various more natural-sounding expressions, which is very helpful for my studies.
Still, I feel like I wrote better overall this time.
Are you good at networking?
I’m really not good at networking.
I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’t suit myselfe.
Myself/himself/herself etc. should only be used when the subject is the same person as the object. Here, the subject "that" is referring to "being an outgoing person", while the object is you. Example: I like myself. She made herself a nice dinner.
Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relations with other people on there.
SNS is not a common acronym in English speaking countries, it is best to use the full name "Social Networking Services".
The grammar is correct, but it may not convey your idea as intended. My suggestion is:
Additionally, I’ve been using various social networking services and posting about my hobbies, but I can't really connect with other people there. (note that I also removed the "on" to make it more natural)
I have no idea how I can make mynew friends. (or I have no idea how to make new friends.)
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I used to be social phobic back in the days. One day I started forcing myself to join various activities and classes. Eventually socializing became natural for me. I think to make new friends require some initiative to put yourself in an environment which naturally require you to interact with strangers. The start is always the hardest, but it gets easier and easier.
Jan. 2, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You teach me various more natural-sounding expressions, which is very helpful for my studies.
Still, I feel like I wrote better overall this time.
Are you good at networking?
I’m really not good at networking.
I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’'t suit myselfe.
Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relationships with other people on there.
I have no idea how Ito make my new friends.
Jan. 2, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I feel like I wrote better overall this time.
Are you good at networking?
I’m really not good at networking.
I tried to be an outgoing person, but that totally didn’t suit myselfe.
Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relationships with the other people on there.
To "have relations" between people could be interpreted to as a euphemistic way to mean having sex. It's better to avoid this phrase to avoid being misinterpreted.
"To have a relationship/to have relationships" is what you should use instead.
I have no idea how Ito make many new friends.
OR: "I have no idea how I should make new friends."
OR: "I have no idea how I am going to make new friends."
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Great work!
Jan. 2, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You teach me various more natural-sounding expressions, which is very helpful for my studies.
Still, I feel like I wrote better overall this time.
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Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relations with other people on there. Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relationships with the other people on there. To "have relations" between people could be interpreted to as a euphemistic way to mean having sex. It's better to avoid this phrase to avoid being misinterpreted. "To have a relationship/to have relationships" is what you should use instead. Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relationships with other people on there. Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have relations with other people on there. SNS is not a common acronym in English speaking countries, it is best to use the full name "Social Networking Services". The grammar is correct, but it may not convey your idea as intended. My suggestion is: Additionally, I’ve been using various social networking services and posting about my hobbies, but I can't really connect with other people there. (note that I also removed the "on" to make it more natural) Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have "any relations" is OK too! This just sounds more natural. Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I don’t have Additionally, I’ve been using various SNS and posting about my hobbies, but I |
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