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aietra

April 5, 2021

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April 2021 challenge #4

我喜欢吃!我最喜欢印度食物。每年在我的生日我和我的家去在印度饭馆。

我也喜欢吃不健康的东西,吃很多糖!因为水果有糖,所以水果非常好吃。我最喜欢西瓜,草莓,芒果,柠檬。

我不喜欢盐,又啤酒,又葡萄酒。


I like to eat! I like Indian food the most. Every year on my birthday, my family and I go to an Indian restaurant.

I also like to eat unhealthy things - I eat a lot of sugar. Fruit is very tasty, because it has a lot of sugar. I most like watermelon, strawberries, mango and lemons.

I don't like salt, beer or wine.

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April 2021 challenge #4

我喜欢吃!

我最喜欢印度食物。

每年在我生日的时候,我和我的家人喜欢印度饭馆用餐

我也喜欢吃不健康的东西,比如,吃很多糖!

因为水果有糖,所以水果非常好吃。

我最喜欢西瓜,草莓,芒果柠檬。

我不喜欢盐,又啤酒,又、啤酒和葡萄酒。

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aietra

April 5, 2021

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Thanks, as always - that's all really helpful! 比如 is going to be an especially useful addition to my vocabulary, I think - I didn't know that word before. :)

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Jack

April 5, 2021

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No worries, if you have any questions about Chinese, please feel free to let me know.

我喜欢吃!


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我也喜欢吃不健康的东西,吃很多糖!


我也喜欢吃不健康的东西,比如,吃很多糖!

April 2021 challenge #4


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我最喜欢印度食物。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

每年在我的生日我和我的家去在印度饭馆。


每年在我生日的时候,我和我的家人喜欢印度饭馆用餐

因为水果有糖,所以水果非常好吃。


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我最喜欢西瓜,草莓,芒果,柠檬。


我最喜欢西瓜,草莓,芒果柠檬。

我不喜欢盐,又啤酒,又葡萄酒。


我不喜欢盐,又啤酒,又、啤酒和葡萄酒。

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