Nov. 16, 2024
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I’m on the bus for hiking and suddenly remember that I haven’t shown you the video or picture of my last hike.
Here it is: https://youtu.be/UbrRwVfGAH8
Let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.
Have a nice weekend everyone!
I’m on thea bus forto a hiking destination and suddenly remembered that I haven’t shown you the video or picture of my last hike.
Here it is: https://youtu.be/UbrRwVfGAH8 Let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.
Have a nice weekend everyone!
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Thanks for sharing this video. I have two suggestions. One is to specify *where* the film was taken and perhaps also *when* it was filmed. Some readers might be interest in the place and time. A second suggestions to offer credits to the music creators at the end of the video: a short 1-second acknowledge of their help. (I always add credits to
the videos I create. You might also consider adding a "Creative License" along the video. This lets views it is okay
to view.)
Nov. 18, 2024
Thank you so much!
Your suggestions are so great that I will try to make those changes next time!
Thanks again!
Nov. 18, 2024
Oh, I will make a change the next time, because I've finished a video of the hike I talked about in this entry. But I will add the location and time in the text.
I’m on the bus forto go hiking and suddenly remembered that I haven’t shown you the video or picture ofrom my last hike.
Nov. 17, 2024
Thank you very much!
Another Video
I’m on the bus for hiking and suddenly remember that I haven’t shown you the video or picture of my last hike.
Here it is: https://youtu.be/UbrRwVfGAH8 Let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.
Have a nice weekend everyone!
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You too 👋🏽
Nov. 17, 2024
Thank you very much!
Another Video
I’m on the bus forto go hiking and suddenly remember that I haven’t shown you the video or picture ofrom my last hike.
You wrote this using the "historical present" instead of the past tense. This is fine, but may be considered a little poetic in some contexts. An alternative in the past tense would be:
"I was on the bus to go hiking and suddenly remembered that I hadn’t shown you the video or picture from my last hike."
Also, you said "picture" - did you mean "pictures" or you only took one picture?
Here it is: https://youtu.be/UbrRwVfGAH8 Let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.
Have a nice weekend everyone!
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Very pretty scenery!
Nov. 17, 2024
Thank you very much!
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