March 30, 2021
Another unproductive day
I've been days trying to avoid my work. People called this "procastination". I looked up for this word in a dictionary and the definition was the same thing I was doing. In these days I read "la metamorfosis" by Kafka, and to be sincere it's not a great book. Then I search in google why this book is so famous, and I found out that I interpreted the story in a different way than everyone. For me, from now on his family would be more active and owners of their own life.
Another unproductive day
I've bespent days trying to avoiding my work.
People called this "procrastination"."
I looked up for this word in a dictionary, and the definition was the same thing I was doing.
In tThese days I have been reading "lLa mMetamorfosis" by Kafka, and to be sincerefrank, it's not a great book.
My rephrasing and tense change here is to make the sentence sound more natural
Then I searched in gGoogle why this book is so famous, and I found out that I interpreted the story in a different way than everyone else.
You could also say "I Googled" - it's very common phrasing.
For me, from now on his family would be more active and owners of their own life.
I'm not sure what you mean here.
March 31, 2021
For me, from now on his family would be more active and owners of their own life.
It's my fault, It's a comment about the end of the book but I put it without context.
March 31, 2021
I thought that might be it, though it's been years since I read the book. If people haven't read Metamorphosis , they probably wouldn't know.
April 1, 2021
Thanks! your comments are very useful for me
Another unproductive day
I've been days trying to avoid my work for days.
you are avoiding the work, not the day
People called this "procrastination".
people still call this procrastination, so it is not past tense (called)
I looked up for this word in a dictionary and the definition was the same thingdescribes what I was doing.
In these days I read "la metamorfosis" by Kafka, and, to be sincerehonest, it's not a great book.
sincere is not exactly the right word to use in this sentence
Then I search in google why this book is so famous, and I found out that I interpreted the story in a different way than everyone.
For me, from now on his family would be more active and owners of their own life.
I'm exactly sure what you are trying to say here... Sorry
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Great Job!!!! Most of these were correct. The most problems are about usage and grammar issues. Other than that, I think you are doing great.
March 30, 2021
Thanks!! to be honest I don't like study grammar but I'll improve
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