June 3, 2025
Yesterday, Monday 02nd Jun, I was sitting on my chair while I was solving mathematical problems I had to update before midday. I don't like to waste my time, so I was listening to a podcast. The podcast was from a well-known youtuber, here in Mexico, "El temach". He is a controversial person because his ideas can be judged like misogynistic and aggressive towards women. Perhaps there is an ocean of his ideas that nobody has the courage to through or even think. His popularity has increased since he was "funado". I mean, the main point of this explanation is that I was listening to his speech when I heard sentences that matched my mind and my unconscious. He said that you don't have to give up, that your mind will tell you how untalented and second-rate you are, every moment you´re moving on. And as he was saying that, I was remembering one battle I had when I was 15 years old.
I was in 3rt round, the place was my gym, on the ring there were two teenagers who where fighting each other. I was heated with a mount of punches and my vision began to blur, my legs had forgotten how to stand by. My mind screamed with all my forces "I won't be defeated", my soul would never give up against that pain, but my opponent stopped. "He is done" he said, and left the ring in the middle of the fight. It hurt more than any punch to my face I received.
Since that day, in each combat I had my head could only think about those words. My body didn't give up, but I gave up, me and my mind; and I lost. I lost my soul, my courage. The fear overcame me, and I left boxing one month after that fight. Now that I see what happened, my desire has been reborn in my soul and I won't surrender against anything, even if I lose. It's easier to say than to do, but I won't live with shame again.
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Yesterday, Monday 02nd, June 2, I was sitting on my chair while I was solving mathematical problems that I had to update before midday.
This is how dates typically appear.
The podcast was from a well-known youtuber, here in Mexico, "El tTemach".
A single comma can introduce the appositive phrase (in this case, the name).
He is a controversial person because his ideas can be judged likeas misogynistic and aggressive towards women.
It is more normal to say "judged as." If the Spanish word is "como," then "como" can mean like or as, but deciding which of these to use is more complicated.
Perhaps there is an ocean of his ideas that nobody has the courage to go through or even think.
"through" needs a verb before it
His popularity has increased since he was "funado".
I mean, the main point of this explanation is that I was listening to his speech when I heard sentences that matched my mind and my unconscious.
He said that you don't have to give up, and that your mind will tell you how untalented and second-rate you are, every moment you´'re moving onforward.
"To move on" usually means to stop doing one thing and start doing a different thing.
And as he was saying that, I was remembering one battle I had when I was 15 years old.
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I was in 3rtd round, the place was my gym, oand in the ring there were two teenagers who where fighting each other.
I was so heated with the a mount of punches andthat my vision began to blur, and my legs had forgotten how to stand by.
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My mind screamed with all my forces, "I won't be defeated"," and my soul would never give up against that pain, but my opponent stopped.
"He is done," he said, and left the ring in the middle of the fight.
Since that day, in each combat I had my head, I could only think about those words.
My body didn't give up, but I gave up, meyself and my mind; and I lost.
I lost my soul, my courage.
The fear overcame me, and I left boxing one month after that fight.
Now that I see what happened, my desire has been reborn in my soul and I won't surrender against anything, even if I lose.
It's easier to say than to do, but I won't live with shame again.
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It's interesting how the story started with mathematics but quickly changed to the main topic. Errors are, as far as I can tell, minor ones. I haven't listened to this youtube guy, but I hope those people are wrong and that he isn't any type of misogynist.
...and I lost.
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"He is done" he said, and left the ring in the middle of the fight.
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Now that I see what happened, my desire has been reborn in my soul and I won't surrender against anything, even if I lose.
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Yesterday, Monday 02nd Jun, I was sitting on my chair while I was solving mathematical problems I had to update before midday. Yesterday, Monday Yesterday, Monday This is how dates typically appear. Yesterday, Monday The other variation is understandable, but “June 2nd” looks more natural. “Mathematical problems” works, but “math problems” is more widely said. “Midday” also works, but “noon” is more widely said. |
I don't like to waste my time, so I was listening to a podcast. I don't like to waste I don't like to waste my time, so I was listening to a podcast. |
The podcast was from a well-known youtuber, here in Mexico, "El temach".
The podcast was from a well-known youtuber A single comma can introduce the appositive phrase (in this case, the name). The podcast was “YouTuber” is grammatically correct as the platform is spelled “YouTube” |
He is a controversial person because his ideas can be judged like misogynistic and aggressive towards women. He He is a controversial person because his ideas can be judged It is more normal to say "judged as." If the Spanish word is "como," then "como" can mean like or as, but deciding which of these to use is more complicated. He is a controversial person because his ideas can be |
Perhaps there is an ocean of his ideas that nobody has the courage to through or even think. Perhaps there Perhaps there is an ocean of his ideas that nobody has the courage to go through or even think. "through" needs a verb before it Perhaps there is an ocean of his ideas that nobody has the courage to through or even think. |
His popularity has increased since he was "funado". His popularity has increased since he was "funado" (canceled). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I mean, the main point of this explanation is that I was listening to his speech when I heard sentences that matched my mind and my unconscious.
This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
He said that you don't have to give up, that your mind will tell you how untalented and second-rate you are, every moment you´re moving on. He said that you He said that you don't have to give up "To move on" usually means to stop doing one thing and start doing a different thing. He said You should use quotation marks when quoting something somebody else said to make the passage less confusing. |
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