Sept. 30, 2025
An Accident
Yesterday morning, all of us were doing our final exam and the classroom was quiet. Suddenly, we heard a shout and a female student fell to the ground and uncontrollably trembled. Immediately, two teachers who were auditing us rushed toward the student to aid her. Consequently, we were asked to temporarily stop the exam and left the classroom until we were asked to return. Our teachers called the school emergency workers and 911 for help simultaneously. While we were waiting outside of the room, most of us suspect this accident resulted from epilepsy.
The good news was that we were told my classmate was in stable condition in the hospital, and the bad news is she will probably not qualified to continue this program.
An Accident
Yesterday morning, all of us were doing our final exam and the classroom was quiet.
Suddenly, we heard a shout and a female student fell to the ground and uncontrollably trembled.
Immediately, two teachers who were auditwatching us rushed toward the student to aid her.
Consequently, we were asked to temporarily stop the exam and left the classroom until we were asked to return.
Our teachers called the school emergency workers and 911 for help simultaneously.
While we were waiting outside of the room, most of us suspect this accident resulted from epilepsy.
The good news was that we were told my classmate was in stable condition in the hospital, and t. The bad news is she will probably not qualifiedy to continue this program.
Immediately, two teachers who were auditsupervising us rushed toward the student to aid her.
While we were waiting outside of the room, most of us suspected this accident resulted from epilepsy.
The good news wais that we were told my classmate was in stable condition in the hospital, and the bad news is she will probably not be qualified to continue studying at this program.
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Very good! A few words here and there, but otherwise very rich and natural.
Sept. 30, 2025
Thank you for your corrections!
Immediately, two teachers who were auditwatching us rushed toward the student to aid her.
The word “auditing” seems a bit out of place here, as teachers don’t usually perform “audits.” An audit is more of a formal inventory taken by a management team in an office setting, like auditing your taxes. Unless they were specifically performing an audit, in which case you can leave it :D
The good news was that we were told my classmate was in stable condition in the hospital, and the bad news is she will probably not be qualified to continue this program.
Sept. 30, 2025
Thank you for your corrections!
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An Accident This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday morning, all of us were doing our final exam and the classroom was quiet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Suddenly, we heard a shout and a female student fell to the ground and uncontrollably trembled. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Immediately, two teachers who were auditing us rushed toward the student to aid her. Immediately, two teachers who were The word “auditing” seems a bit out of place here, as teachers don’t usually perform “audits.” An audit is more of a formal inventory taken by a management team in an office setting, like auditing your taxes. Unless they were specifically performing an audit, in which case you can leave it :D Immediately, two teachers who were Immediately, two teachers who were |
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Our teachers called the school emergency workers and 911 for help simultaneously. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While we were waiting outside of the room, most of us suspect this accident resulted from epilepsy. While we were waiting outside of the room, most of us suspected this accident resulted from epilepsy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The good news was that we were told my classmate was in stable condition in the hospital, and the bad news is she will probably not qualified to continue this program. The good news was that we were told my classmate was in stable condition in the hospital, and the bad news is she will probably not be qualified to continue this program. The good news The good news was that we were told my classmate was in stable condition in the hospital |
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Consequently, we were asked to temporarily stop the exam and left the classroom until we were asked to return. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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