The American Alcohol Industry ois in Decline

The enormous alcohol industry in US had been growing , now face with thenited States has reached its first downturn ofin the 21th century; a. Alcohol sales have declined by 2.6% in 2023 an 2.8% in 2024 by volumes compare to former year with the sharpest drop in experience spirit brands section: 23% last fall.. They have further declined by 2.8% in 2024, which is 23% more than the previous year.

Someone preoposle the reason of this decline is rising health consciousness.ink its because of people getting educated on the negative effects of alcohol.

However, research has found that number of adults inadults that are 35-54 agre range has been stagnated even 50-or-more years old self-identify as drinkless likely to identify as drinkers compared to those that are 50 years old or older.

Only amouThis is in contrast to 2001 when it was the percent of younger adults drinker significantly drop from 72% in 2001 to 59% in 2024.s were 72%. As of 2024, this has shrinked to 59% because of marijuana being a popular alternative.

As they prefer marijuana as alternative.

This presents a big deliilemma for the government. On one hand, alcohol generated $8.03 billion in alcohol tax revenue and employed directlydirectly employed more than 92,000 Americans.

adverbs (directly) should go first

On the other handMeanwhile, Alcohol comnsumption is relcorrleated to increases in car accidents and liver disease in, which burdein turn burden the American healthcare system.

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In the end, one whoGen Z will decide the fate of this industry is Gen Ze alcohol industry. wWill they choose lung cancer or liver cancer.?

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American Alcohol Industry oin Decline

The enormous alcohol industry in US had been growing , but is now faced with the first downturn of the 21sth century; alcohol sales declined 2.6% in 2023 and 2.8% in 2024 by volumes compared to formerthe previous year with the sharpest drop in experienced by spirit brands section:s: they fell 23% last fall.

1st, 2nd, 3rd have unique endings, and from 20 onwards this pattern repeats, so 21st, 22nd, 23rd don't use "th".

Someone proposed that the reason ofor this decline is rising health consciousness.

However research found that the number of adults in the 35-54 age range has been stagnated even 50-or-more years old, and even the 50+ age range, that self-identify as drinkers has stagnated.

The ordering of your clauses was very unnatural and hard to follow, so moved parts around to make them easier to follow

Only the amount of young adults drinkering has significantly dropped - from 72% in 2001 to 59% in 2024.

AsThat's because they prefer marijuana as an alternative.

You can't start a sentence with "As" like this.

This presents a big deliilemma for the government. On the one hand alcohol generated $8.03 billion in alcohol tax revenue and employed directlydirectly employed more than 92,000 Americans.

On the other hand Aalcohol comnsumption is related to an increase in car accidents and liver disease in which burdens the healthcare system.

In the end, the ones who will decide fate of this industry isare Gen Z. wWill they choose lung cancer or liver cancer.?

American Alcohol Industry oin Decline

The enormous alcohol industry in the US had been growing , now face with thebut now is facing its first downturn of the 21sth century; a. Alcohol volume declined by 2.6% in 2023 and 2.8% in 2024 by volumes compare to former year, with the sharpest drop in experiencepremium spirit brands section: 23% last fall.

Someone propose the reason ofor this decline is rising health consciousness.

"Someone" refers to one person. You can use "some" instead to refer to some people in general.

However, research has found that the number of adults in 35-54 age range has been stagnated even 50-or-more years old self-identify as drinkerwithin the 35 - 54 age range who self-identify as drinkers has stagnated. This is also the case for those aged 50 and up.

I put the "50 and up" part in a separate sentence to keep the first sentence from becoming too complex.

OnlyThe amount of young adults drinkers dropped significantly drop from 72% in 2001 to 59% in 2024, as they prefer marijuana as an alternative.

As they prefer marijuana as alternative.

This is an incomplete sentence, so it needs to be combined with the previous sentence.

This presents a big deliilemma for the government. On one hand, the alcohol industry generated $8.03 billion in alcohol tax revenue and employed directly more than 92,000 Americans.

On the other hand A, alcohol comnsumption is related to an increase in car accidents and liver disease in, which burden the healthcare system.

In the end, the ones who decide the fate of this industry isare Gen Z. wWill they choose lung cancer or liver cancer.?