May 10, 2021
AHMED'S NEW CAR
AHMED'S CAR
Ahmed decided to buy a new car. He used to have one, but it was very old. He phoned his best friend Omar and told him, 'I would like to buy a new car and I want you to come with me tomorrow.' Omar was excited to go with him so he said, "Of course why not." The next day they went together to the nearest car dealer. Ahmed asked the dealer, "I would like to buy a new car, and I want it to be affordable." The dealer told him that, "Toyota Yaris is the best choice for you because it is affordable and doesn't burn a lot of fuel." Ahmed asked Omar about his opinion, and Ahmed said, "If I were you, I would buy it. It is so beautiful and it is not too expensive." So Ahmed decided to buy it.
AHMED'S NEW CAR
AHMED'S CAR
Ahmed decided to buy a new car.
He used to have one, but it was very old.
He phoned his best friend Omar and told him, 'I would like to buy a new car and I want you to come with me tomorrow.'
Omar was excited to go with him, so he said, "'Of course w. Why not."?'
Keep punctuation consistent - either double quotes (") or single ('), but not both.
The next day they went together to the nearest car dealer together.
Ahmed asketold the dealer, "I would like to buy a new car, and I want it to be affordable."
"Ask" = question
The dealer told him that, "Toyota Yaris is the best choice for you because it is affordable and doesn't burn a lot of fuel."
Or "The dealer told him that Toyota Yaris was the best choice..."
Ahmed asked Omar about his opinion, and AhmedOmar said, "If I were you, I would buy it."
Or "Ahmed asked Omar what he thought,"
It is so beautiful and it is not too expensive."
So Ahmed decided to buy it.
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Nice!
May 10, 2021
Ahmed asked Omar about his opinion, and AhmedOmar said, "If I were you, I would buy it."
Are the quotation marks ok now?
Ahmed asked Omar about his opinion, and Omar said, 'If I were you, I would buy it.' It is so beautiful and it is not too expensive.'
May 10, 2021
Are the quotation marks ok now? Ahmed asked Omar about his opinion, and Omar said, 'If I were you, I would buy it.' It is so beautiful and it is not too expensive.'
Wait, I'm sorry - I made a mistake there. Didn't realize that Omar was still speaking in both sentences. So you actually *shouldn't* have quotation marks after "buy it."
Correct version: Ahmed asked Omar about his opinion, and Omar said, 'If I were you, I would buy it. It is so beautiful and it is not too expensive.' (single quotes) OR Ahmed asked Omar about his opinion, and Omar said, "If I were you, I would buy it. It is so beautiful and it is not too expensive." (double quotes)
I apologize for the confusion!
May 10, 2021
Thanks!
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AHMED'S CAR This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Ahmed decided to buy a new car. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He used to have one, but it was very old. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He phoned his best friend Omar and told him, 'I would like to buy a new car and I want you to come with me tomorrow.' This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Omar was excited to go with him so he said, "Of course why not." Omar was excited to go with him, so he said, Keep punctuation consistent - either double quotes (") or single ('), but not both. |
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The next day they went together to the nearest car dealer. The next day they went |
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Ahmed asked the dealer, "I would like to buy a new car, and I want it to be affordable." Ahmed "Ask" = question |
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The dealer told him that, "Toyota Yaris is the best choice for you because it is affordable and doesn't burn a lot of fuel." The dealer told him Or "The dealer told him that Toyota Yaris was the best choice..." |
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Ahmed asked Omar about his opinion, and Ahmed said, "If I were you, I would buy it. Ahmed asked Omar about his opinion, and Or "Ahmed asked Omar what he thought," |
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It is so beautiful and it is not too expensive." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So Ahmed decided to buy it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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