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Agree or disagree: Improving relations with other Asian nations should be priority for the Japanese government

  Improving relationships with Asian nations should be a priority for the government, because those countries are close not only geographically but also economically and culturally. It is true that relationships with Western countries are also important, but Asian countries cannot be underestimated as partners.
Firstly, since Asian countries are geographically close, political problems with them easily become serious and may trigger a conflict. Therefore, getting along well with those countries is necessary for national security.
Secondly, Asian countries, especially China, are strongly connected to Japan economically. Now, those countries produce most of the products that Japan imports. It can be said that the Japanese society can be sustained without workers in Asian countries. For example, China is now the biggest trade partner.
Finally, as an Asian country, Japan has many things in common with Asian countries. The Chinese characters we use today came from China. Buddhism, which rooted deeply in Japanese culture, is still believed many Asian countries. In the past few years K-pops gained huge popularity in Japan.
Japan has become one of the most developed countries in Asia and has a strong connection with Western countries. However, I strongly believe that we should remember Japan is a member of Asia.

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Agree or disagree:(2)

Agree or disagree: Improving relations with other Asian nations should be a priority for the Japanese government.

Improving relationships with Asian nations should be a priority for the government, because those countries are close not only geographically, but also economically and culturally.

It is true that relationships with Western countries are also important, but Asian countries cannot be underestimated as partners.

Firstly, since Asian countries are geographically close, political problems with them easily become serious and may trigger a conflicts.

Alternative: "become serious and escalate into conflicts."

Therefore, getting along well with those countries is necessary for national security.

Secondly, Asian countries, especially China, are strongly connected to Japan economically.

Now, those countries produce most of the products that Japan imports.

It can be saidSome might say that the Japanese society can be sustained without workers in Asian countries.

For example, China is now theJapan's biggest trade partner.

Finally, as an Asian country, Japan has many things in common with Asian countries.

The Chinese characters we use today came from China.

Buddhism, which rooted deeply in Japanese culture, is still believedpopular in many Asian countries.

In the past few years, K-pop has gained huge popularity in Japan.

Or "K-pop artists have..."

Japan has become one of the most developed countries in Asia and has a strong connection with Western countries.

However, I strongly believe that we should remember Japan is a member of Asia.

However, I strongly believe that we should remember Japan is a member of Asia.


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Agree or disagree:(2)


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Agree or disagree: Improving relations with other Asian nations should be priority for the Japanese government


Agree or disagree: Improving relations with other Asian nations should be a priority for the Japanese government.

Improving relationships with Asian nations should be a priority for the government, because those countries are close not only geographically but also economically and culturally.


Improving relationships with Asian nations should be a priority for the government, because those countries are close not only geographically, but also economically and culturally.

It is true that relationships with Western countries are also important, but Asian countries cannot be underestimated as partners.


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Firstly, since Asian countries are geographically close, political problems with them easily become serious and may trigger a conflict.


Firstly, since Asian countries are geographically close, political problems with them easily become serious and may trigger a conflicts.

Alternative: "become serious and escalate into conflicts."

Therefore, getting along well with those countries is necessary for national security.


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Secondly, Asian countries, especially China, are strongly connected to Japan economically.


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Now, those countries produce most of the products that Japan imports.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It can be said that the Japanese society can be sustained without workers in Asian countries.


It can be saidSome might say that the Japanese society can be sustained without workers in Asian countries.

For example, China is now the biggest trade partner.


For example, China is now theJapan's biggest trade partner.

Finally, as an Asian country, Japan has many things in common with Asian countries.


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The Chinese characters we use today came from China.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Buddhism, which rooted deeply in Japanese culture, is still believed many Asian countries.


Buddhism, which rooted deeply in Japanese culture, is still believedpopular in many Asian countries.

In the past few years K-pops gained huge popularity in Japan.


In the past few years, K-pop has gained huge popularity in Japan.

Or "K-pop artists have..."

Japan has become one of the most developed countries in Asia and has a strong connection with Western countries.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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