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Agree or disagree: Electronic voting should be promoted

With advancing information technology, the system of society has changed slowly but steadily. Now, the conventional voting system should be replaced by electronic one. That is because it is superior to the conventional one in the ease of counting votes, the credibility of results, and the cost efficiency.
Firstly, counting votes is one of the most demanding job in voting system. No matter how a man takes effort to count votes faster, it is impossible to beat a computer. Computers can count votes in a moment, and they make no mistakes.
Secondly, anyone makes mistakes, but computers not. Computers will not miss a vote or count one twice. Moreover, it is possible to buy people who count votes, but not computers. Therefore, the results are more credible when computers count the votes.
Finally, electronic voting system can save money. It is true that it costs a lot to install it, but labor costs when hiring people again and again are obviously more expensive, especially in developed countries in which manpower cost has increased year by year.
For above reasons, I strongly believe that electronic voting should be promoted. Election is the heart of democracy. Therefore, we should pursue to improve the way of it.

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Agree or disagree: Electronic voting should be promoted

With advancing information technology, the system of society has changed slowly but steadily.

Now, the conventional voting system should be replaced by an electronic one.

Thatis is because it is superior to the conventional one in the ease ofway because it is easier to counting votes, the credibility of resultsit is more credible, and the cost is efficiencyt.

Firstly, counting votes is one of the most demanding jobs in the voting system.

No matter how a man takes effortmuch effort someone puts in to counting the votes faster, it is impossible to beat a computer.

Computers can count votes in a moment, and they make no mistakes.

Secondly, anyonepeople often makes mistakes, but computers do not.

Computers will not miss a vote or count one twice.

Moreover, it is possible to buy people who count votes, but not computers.

Therefore, the results are more credible when computers count the votes.

Finally, an electronic voting system can save money.

It is true that it costs a lot to install it, but labor costs when hiring people again and again are obviously more expensive, especially in developed countries in which manpower costwhere employee wage has increased year by year.

For the above reasons, I strongly believe that an electronic voting system should be promoted.

Election iss are the heart of democracy.

Therefore, we should pursuetry to improve the way of it.

Agree or disagree: Electronic voting should be promoted


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With advancing information technology, the system of society has changed slowly but steadily.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now, the conventional voting system should be replaced by electronic one.


Now, the conventional voting system should be replaced by an electronic one.

That is because it is superior to the conventional one in the ease of counting votes, the credibility of results, and the cost efficiency.


Thatis is because it is superior to the conventional one in the ease ofway because it is easier to counting votes, the credibility of resultsit is more credible, and the cost is efficiencyt.

Firstly, counting votes is one of the most demanding job in voting system.


Firstly, counting votes is one of the most demanding jobs in the voting system.

No matter how a man takes effort to count votes faster, it is impossible to beat a computer.


No matter how a man takes effortmuch effort someone puts in to counting the votes faster, it is impossible to beat a computer.

Computers can count votes in a moment, and they make no mistakes.


Computers can count votes in a moment, and they make no mistakes.

Secondly, anyone makes mistakes, but computers not.


Secondly, anyonepeople often makes mistakes, but computers do not.

Computers will not miss a vote or count one twice.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Moreover, it is possible to buy people who count votes, but not computers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, the results are more credible when computers count the votes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, electronic voting system can save money.


Finally, an electronic voting system can save money.

It is true that it costs a lot to install it, but labor costs when hiring people again and again are obviously more expensive, especially in developed countries in which manpower cost has increased year by year.


It is true that it costs a lot to install it, but labor costs when hiring people again and again are obviously more expensive, especially in developed countries in which manpower costwhere employee wage has increased year by year.

For above reasons, I strongly believe that electronic voting should be promoted.


For the above reasons, I strongly believe that an electronic voting system should be promoted.

Election is the heart of democracy.


Election iss are the heart of democracy.

Therefore, we should pursue to improve the way of it.


Therefore, we should pursuetry to improve the way of it.

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