Sept. 17, 2025
About my last vacation
A few days ago i went to north of my country , it is one of the incredible things that i saw in my life. I sleep just for a few hours there but i didn't have any burnout. My function was so good there. Although i slept less, but i didn't have any insomnia.Before this vacation i taought i'm going to be depression but this vacation make my feeling better.
A few days ago iI went to the north of my country , it is one of the most incredible things that i sawI have seen in my life.
I sleep juspt for a only few hours there but iI didn't have any burnout.
Not sure what you mean with having burnout - burnout means when you work too hard and then are unable to do things.
My function was so good there.
Not sure what you mean here?
Although iI slept less, but iI didn't have any insomnia. Before this vacation i, I tahought i, "I'm going to become depressioned" but this vacation makde mye feeling better.
No need for "but" as the "although" already fulfils this function.
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Good job! Focus on capitalising "I" as we never write it lower case when it's by itself (sometimes natives will write it lower case anyway but it's completely incorrect).
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About my last vacation |
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A few days ago i went to north of my country , it is one of the incredible things that i saw in my life. A few days ago |
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I sleep just for a few hours there but i didn't have any burnout. I sle Not sure what you mean with having burnout - burnout means when you work too hard and then are unable to do things. |
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My function was so good there. My function was so good there. Not sure what you mean here? |
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Although i slept less, but i didn't have any insomnia.Before this vacation i taought i'm going to be depression but this vacation make my feeling better. Although No need for "but" as the "although" already fulfils this function. |
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