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Paxaveo

Sept. 26, 2025

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About my favourite movie

My favourite movie is "Almost Famous". This is story about young beginner journalist William Miller, who goes in music tour with goup "Stillwater". William must writte article about this goup and it's members. During the trip William met many adventures and grow up like person. Partly this story has autobiographical motif. Directed and written Cameron Crowe in the past worked music journalist. Some moments in this movie happened in reality. Wich adds a special touch. Other strongh point this movie is music. After watched I add all music in my playlist. Scene on the bus during the song "Tiny Dancer" always in my heart.

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About mMy fFavourite mMovie

Not a strict rule but titles of things are usually written in "title case".

This is story is about young beginner journalist William Miller,William Miller, a young, amateur journalist who goes inon a music tour with gthe group "Stillwater".

"Beginner" is understandable but feels a little odd.

William must writte articles about this group and it's members.

About mMy favourite movie

This is story about young beginner journalist William Miller, who goes in music tour with a group called "Stillwater".

William must writte an article about this group and it's members.

During the trip William metexperienced many adventures and grow up like person.

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I didn't correct the rest, see if you can based on the other corrections! :)

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Paxaveo

Sept. 26, 2025

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Thanks for the corrections! Here is my improved version:
"About My Favourite Movie
My favourite movie is "Almost Famous". This story is about William Miller, a young, amateur journalist, who goes on a music tour with a goup called "Stillwater". William must writte an article about this group and it's members. During the trip William experienced many adventures and grow as a person. Part of the story is autobiographical. The directed and writer Cameron Crowe in the past worked music journalist. Some moments in this movie happened in reality, wich adds a special touch. Other strongh point this movie is music. After watching it, I added all music to my playlist. Scene on the bus with the song "Tiny Dancer" always stay in my heart."

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lowkeyyystop

Sept. 26, 2025

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write* grew* The other strong point is that this movie contains music* will always stay*

After watched I add all music in my playlist.


Scene on the bus during the song "Tiny Dancer" always in my heart.


About my favourite movie


About mMy favourite movie

About mMy fFavourite mMovie

Not a strict rule but titles of things are usually written in "title case".

My favourite movie is "Almost Famous".


This is story about young beginner journalist William Miller, who goes in music tour with goup "Stillwater".


This is story about young beginner journalist William Miller, who goes in music tour with a group called "Stillwater".

This is story is about young beginner journalist William Miller,William Miller, a young, amateur journalist who goes inon a music tour with gthe group "Stillwater".

"Beginner" is understandable but feels a little odd.

William must writte article about this goup and it's members.


William must writte an article about this group and it's members.

William must writte articles about this group and it's members.

During the trip William met many adventures and grow up like person.


During the trip William metexperienced many adventures and grow up like person.

Partly this story has autobiographical motif.


Directed and written Cameron Crowe in the past worked music journalist.


Some moments in this movie happened in reality.


Wich adds a special touch.


Other strongh point this movie is music.


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