Sept. 5, 2025
About my country weather
My country is small, but beautiful. We have four seasons - winter, summer, spring and autumn. The winter is very cold, very much snow and long nights. The summer sometime is really hot, around all green, the best season ever. The autumn is depression season. The weather become cold, the evenings are getting longer. but the trees change colors - occurs yellow, red and orange colors. The spring is wake up time. The trees become green, the weather is getting warmer. The time when you born again.
About my country's weather
The winter is very cold, very muchwith a lot of snow and long nights.
"very much" isn't something that people use, since "much" is already a strengthener word and it sounds a little childish to stack them up like this.
On top of that, when we're talking about volume, it's more natural to use "a lot of" here.
The summer sometimes is really hot, around all greengreen all around, the best season ever.
The weather becomes cold, the evenings are gettingget longer.
Matching the tense here.
but the trees change colors - occursthere are yellow, red and orange colors.
The trees become green, the weather istarts getting warmer.
Tense again
(It is/It's) The time when you are born again.
Not really a full sentence as you first put it, though if you're being poetic you could sometimes get away with leaving out "it is", it's not really standard
About the weather in my country weather
My country is small, but beautiful.
We have four seasons - winter, summer, spring and autumn.
The winter is very cold, very much with a lot of snow and long nights.
TheIn summer, it is sometime is really hot, around all green, but it is green around and it is the best season ever.
The aAutumn is the season of depression season.
The weather becomes cold, the evenings are gettingget longer.,
but the trees change colors - occurs. They become yellow, red and orange colors.
The spring is wake up time.
The trees become green, the weather is gettinggets warmer.
The time when you born again.
The winter is very cold, very muchthere is a lot of snow, and long nights.
"Very much snow" gets the point across and the meaning will be understood by English speakers. But, it's not grammatically correct and wouldn't be the natural way of speaking.
The summer sometimes is really hot, around all green, the best season ever.
Add an "s" to sometimes.
Not sure what you're trying to say by "all around green"
The autumn is a depressiong season. ¶
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Autumn makes me depressed
Grammatically, if you want the sentence to stay the same, use the first correction.
If you are talking about how yoj feel in the autumn specifically, then use the second correction.
The weather becomes cold, the evenings are getting longer.
Add an "s" to becomes.
but the trees change colors - occurs yellow, red and orange colors.
You don't need the word occurs and you don't need to repeat "colors" since you've written it already. There is context that allows the reader to understand you're talking about colors.
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You did really well. I understood everything you wrote even if it wasn't grammatically correct. The message was clear! Good job!
About my country's weather.
The winter is very cold, very muchwith a lot of snow and long nights.
The summer is sometime is really hot, around allbut everything is green, it's the best season ever.
The autumn is a depressiong season.
The weather becomes cold, the evenings are gettingget longer.
bBut the trees change colors - occurs y. Yellows, reds and orange colors.
The spring is when things wake up time.
The trees become green, the weather is gettinggets warmer.
The time when you are born again.
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Cool entry. As another person mentioned. It reads a lot like a poem. So I tried to not disrupt the poem vibe, but still wanted to make it flow a little better in some spots.
About my country's weather
Include the 's here to indicate possession
The winter is very cold, very muchwith lots of snow and long nights.
"very much snow" is understandable but doesn't sound quite right. A lot of snow or lots of snow would be better
The summer sometime is really hot, around all green, sometimes, but everything is green. It's the best season ever.
I would make this two sentences and try to clarify what you want to say.
The weather becomegets cold, the evenings are gettingget longer.
You could also say "the weather becomes cold", but "gets cold" sounds more natural
About my country's weather
The winter is very cold, very muchwith a lot of snow and long nights.
The summer is sometime is really hot, around all green, the best season ever.
The weather becomes cold, the evenings are getting longer.
The time when you are born again.
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Your journal entry is so beautiful. It reads like a poem, which I really admire. There were really only a few small mistakes, mostly just an S missing at the end of a few words. You are doing amazing and your country sounds beautiful!
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My country is small, but beautiful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We have four seasons - winter, summer, spring and autumn. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The winter is very cold, very much snow and long nights. The winter is very cold, The winter is very cold, "very much snow" is understandable but doesn't sound quite right. A lot of snow or lots of snow would be better The winter is very cold, The winter is very cold, "Very much snow" gets the point across and the meaning will be understood by English speakers. But, it's not grammatically correct and wouldn't be the natural way of speaking. The winter is very cold The winter is very cold, "very much" isn't something that people use, since "much" is already a strengthener word and it sounds a little childish to stack them up like this. On top of that, when we're talking about volume, it's more natural to use "a lot of" here. |
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The summer sometime is really hot, around all green, the best season ever. The summer is sometime The summer I would make this two sentences and try to clarify what you want to say. The summer is sometime The summer sometimes is really hot, around all green, the best season ever. Add an "s" to sometimes. Not sure what you're trying to say by "all around green"
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The autumn is depression season. The autumn is a depressi The autumn is a depressi Grammatically, if you want the sentence to stay the same, use the first correction. If you are talking about how yoj feel in the autumn specifically, then use the second correction.
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The weather become cold, the evenings are getting longer. The weather becomes cold, the evenings are getting longer. The weather You could also say "the weather becomes cold", but "gets cold" sounds more natural The weather becomes cold, the evenings The weather becomes cold, the evenings are getting longer. Add an "s" to becomes. The weather becomes cold, the evenings The weather becomes cold, the evenings Matching the tense here. |
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but the trees change colors - occurs yellow, red and orange colors.
but the trees change colors - You don't need the word occurs and you don't need to repeat "colors" since you've written it already. There is context that allows the reader to understand you're talking about colors. but the trees change color but the trees change colors - |
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The spring is wake up time. The spring is when things wake up This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The trees become green, the weather is getting warmer. The trees become green, the weather The trees become green, the weather The trees become green, the weather Tense again |
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The time when you born again. The time when you are born again. The time when you are born again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! (It is/It's) The time when you are born again. Not really a full sentence as you first put it, though if you're being poetic you could sometimes get away with leaving out "it is", it's not really standard |
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