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SummerTeaWater

May 8, 2021

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About my computer

Today, I combine my two computers into one.

I have used the old computer since 2010 and I have used the other one for 4 years.
I use each computer for different purpose such as working and watching medias.

Recently, the newer computer has made many errors that makes me feel bad to work.
So I decided to combine both computers.

I have a skill to make a computer with parts, so it is easy to put them together into one.
At last, I finally get more powerful computer that has 7 hard disk drivers and 16 GB RAMs.

I will reinstall the operating system to the computer tomorrow.
After that, I will be able to have the computer as if it is in mint condition.

Corrections

Today, I combined my two computers into one.

I haved used the old computer since 2010 and I have used the other one for the past 4 years.

I use each computer for different purpose such as working and watching medias.

Recently, the newer computer has maded been making many errors that makes me feel batoo annoyed to work.

So I decided to combine both computers into one.

I have am skill toed at makeing a computer with parts, so it iwas easy to put them together into one.

At last, I finally gethave a more powerful computer that has 7 hard disk drivers and 16 GB of RAMs.

I will reinstall the operating system to the computer tomorrow.

After that, Iit will be able to have thelike having a computer as if ithat is in mint condition.

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I'm really terrible with computers, so anyone who understands them seems amazing in my eyes, haha!

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SummerTeaWater

May 9, 2021

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Thank you for your correction!

About my computer


Today, I combine my two computers into one.


Today, I combined my two computers into one.

I have used the old computer since 2010 and I have used the other one for 4 years.


I haved used the old computer since 2010 and I have used the other one for the past 4 years.

I use each computer for different purpose such as working and watching medias.


I use each computer for different purpose such as working and watching medias.

Recently, the newer computer has made many errors that makes me feel bad to work.


Recently, the newer computer has maded been making many errors that makes me feel batoo annoyed to work.

So I decided to combine both computers.


So I decided to combine both computers into one.

I have a skill to make a computer with parts, so it is easy to put them together into one.


I have am skill toed at makeing a computer with parts, so it iwas easy to put them together into one.

At last, I finally get more powerful computer that it has 7 Hard Disk Drivers and 16 GB RAM.


I will reinstall the operating system to the computer tomorrow.


I will reinstall the operating system to the computer tomorrow.

After that, I will be able to have the computer as if it is in mint condition.


After that, Iit will be able to have thelike having a computer as if ithat is in mint condition.

At last, I finally get more powerful computer that has 7 hard disk drivers and 16 GB RAMs.


At last, I finally gethave a more powerful computer that has 7 hard disk drivers and 16 GB of RAMs.

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