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Tammy

Aug. 17, 2025

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A YouTube Post

I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend. You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ

Compared to the previous video, does this post enable you to experience my hiking more thoroughly?

Please let me know if you have any suggestions.

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I think both videos and pictures have their pros and cons, but you can combine them. The pictures were beautiful. It's a pity I cannot save the pictures.

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Tammy

Sept. 5, 2025

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谢谢!

你想要哪些?

下次你直接在底下留言,我回头发给你就好啦~

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Toluwani

Sept. 5, 2025

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好的,谢谢。

A YouTube Post

I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend.

"Message" usually means text, and uploading to YouTube involves videos. Since there are pictures, I'd just say you posted some pictures.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ


Compared to the previous video, does this post enable you to experience my hik
inge more thoroughly?

This sentence except it sounds a little stiff and overly formal, even for writing. More natural phrasing would be "...does this post let you experience my hike more vividly?"

Please let me know if you have any suggestions.

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Beautiful pictures and scenery! Thank you for sharing.

Can you tell me if you prefer corrections that are more casual or more formal? I want to make sure my comments are in line with your writing style and intentions.

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Tammy

Aug. 18, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Both of the correction styles have made me very grateful, but I think I intend to be more casual because all the English knowledge I learned at school is too formal.

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hanhaisu

Aug. 19, 2025

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有道理,明白了。

A YouTube Post

I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ Compared to the previous video, does this post enable you to experience my hiking more thoroughly?

Please let me know if you have any suggestions.

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It does give me a broader impression of what the hike was like. I enjoyed the photos, and I enjoy the videos, too. :-)

BTW, until I saw your post, I wasn’t even aware that we could post photos on YouTube. 😀 Do you know if this is a new feature, or has it been there for a while?

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JoeTofu

Aug. 17, 2025

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I been experimenting with combining photos and videos into a single video, with mixed results. :-)

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Tammy

Aug. 18, 2025

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Great!

Maybe it has been for a while.I recall seeing it a long time ago.

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JoeTofu

Aug. 18, 2025

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👍

A YouTube Post

I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ


Compared to the previous video, do
es this post enabese photos let you to experience my hiking more thoroughly?

Please let me know if you have any suggestions.

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Tammy

Aug. 18, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

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marblemenow

Aug. 18, 2025

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You're welcome. Have a nice night/afternoon/day as well.

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I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend.


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I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend.

"Message" usually means text, and uploading to YouTube involves videos. Since there are pictures, I'd just say you posted some pictures.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ Compared to the previous video, does this post enable you to experience my hiking more thoroughly?


You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ


Compared to the previous video, do
es this post enabese photos let you to experience my hiking more thoroughly?

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You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ


Compared to the previous video, does this post enable you to experience my hik
inge more thoroughly?

This sentence except it sounds a little stiff and overly formal, even for writing. More natural phrasing would be "...does this post let you experience my hike more vividly?"

Please let me know if you have any suggestions.


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