Aug. 17, 2025
I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend. You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ
Compared to the previous video, does this post enable you to experience my hiking more thoroughly?
Please let me know if you have any suggestions.
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I think both videos and pictures have their pros and cons, but you can combine them. The pictures were beautiful. It's a pity I cannot save the pictures.
A YouTube Post
I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend.
"Message" usually means text, and uploading to YouTube involves videos. Since there are pictures, I'd just say you posted some pictures.
You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ
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Compared to the previous video, does this post enable you to experience my hikinge more thoroughly?
This sentence except it sounds a little stiff and overly formal, even for writing. More natural phrasing would be "...does this post let you experience my hike more vividly?"
Please let me know if you have any suggestions.
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Beautiful pictures and scenery! Thank you for sharing.
Can you tell me if you prefer corrections that are more casual or more formal? I want to make sure my comments are in line with your writing style and intentions.
A YouTube Post
I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend.
You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ Compared to the previous video, does this post enable you to experience my hiking more thoroughly?
Please let me know if you have any suggestions.
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It does give me a broader impression of what the hike was like. I enjoyed the photos, and I enjoy the videos, too. :-)
BTW, until I saw your post, I wasn’t even aware that we could post photos on YouTube. 😀 Do you know if this is a new feature, or has it been there for a while?
A YouTube Post
I posted a message with ten pictures from my hike last weekend.
You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxbHl7jnn6y4zMR5NrxyTh_bDwtn3HLqUJ
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Compared to the previous video, does this post enabese photos let you to experience my hiking more thoroughly?
Please let me know if you have any suggestions.
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