A Young Girl's Diary

I am planning to read The Diary of Anne Frank. From the foreword, I got to know much more than I was thinking. The version in my hand is said to be a definitive one and adds some parts that were omitted in the previous edition. In this book, Anne Frank was a teenager, who witnessed and described the stories that happened in the warehouse where eight people were hiding to avoid the massacre from the then-German authority in the Netherlands in the 1940s.

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A Young Girl's Diary

I am planning to read The Diary of Anne Frank.

From the foreword, I got to know much more than I was thinkingexpected.

“Was thinking” isn’t wrong, but this sounds more natural.

The version in my hand is said to be a definitive one and adds some parts that were omitted in the previous edition.

In this book, Anne Frank was a teenager, who witnessed and described the stories that happened in the warehouse where eight people were hiding to avoid the massacre from the then-German authority in the Netherlands in the 1940s.

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A Young Girl's Diary


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I am planning to read The Diary of Anne Frank.


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From the foreword, I got to know much more than I was thinking.


From the foreword, I got to know much more than I was thinkingexpected.

“Was thinking” isn’t wrong, but this sounds more natural.

The version in my hand is said to be a definitive one and adds some parts that were omitted in the previous edition.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In this book, Anne Frank was a teenager, who witnessed and described the stories that happened in the warehouse where eight people were hiding to avoid the massacre from the then-German authority in the Netherlands in the 1940s.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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